Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Did you have a nice day Klein?^^
I read your letter and I agree your opinion.
Also, My thinking is like to expert's idea.
Because, My nephew who fourteen years old learn faster than me about English.
I have felt this fact when i each meeting him.
Anyway, If i late to start, i must run faster is a fact.
-homework for today-
What is the significance of a nest egg? Do you have one?
Maybe, if you thinking is in the capitalism, my thinking like to yours.
Nest agg is important things for human life.
And I have accounts that have a little fund at the bank.
However, it is not enough to me.
Because, It is not enough for buying a house and a car.
To live a Korean man is required to get much money.
Is it funny story^^? ~~~
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Kirk!
Talking about nest eggs sure can be horrifying.
This is true most especially in cases where the cost of living in a particular place is very high, just like there is Korea.
Good thing I live here in the Philippines, so money isn\'t really that much of a burden in some occasions.
Nonetheless, we should really earn more for our nest egg.
Do this together with learning English. It sure is an investment!
As you save up more money in your bank accounts, you also need to bank on your English vocabulary.
Perhaps, if you have time, try to share some of the lessons that you learn from me with your nephew.
Whenever you meet, try to talk in English and refrain from speaking Korean.
Can you do this for me and for yourself, Kirk?
Please send my greetings then to your nephew if you meet him today.
I ought to thank you as well for agreeing with my opinion.
It\'s nice to know that someone thinks the same way as I do.
And to answer your question below, Kirk, your story is satirical. I like it!
_Klein
Did you have a nice day Klein?^^>>Correct!I read your letter and I agree your opinion.>>I read your letter and I agree with your opinion.Also, My thinking is like to expert\'s idea.>>Also, my thinking is like that of an expert\'s.
>>Also, I think like an expert.Because, My nephew who fourteen years old learn faster than me about English.>>This is because my nephew, who is 14 years old, learns English faster than me.I have felt this fact when i each meeting him.>>I come to prove this whenever I meet him.
>>I can prove this every time we meet.
>>It becomes more of a fact whenever we meet each other.Anyway, If i late to start, i must run faster is a fact.>>Anyway, if I started late, I must run faster.
>>Anyway, if I started late, it is a fact that I must run faster.-homework for today->>CorrectWhat is the significance of a nest egg? Do you have one?Maybe, if you thinking is in the capitalism, my thinking like to yours.>>Maybe, if you are thinking about capitalism, your viewpoint must be like mine.>>Maybe, if you are thinking about capitalism, our viewpoints must be similar.
Nest agg is important things for human life.>>A nest egg is important for human life.
>>A nest egg is important in our life.And I have accounts that have a little fund at the bank.>>I have meager savings in the bank.However, it is not enough to me. Because, It is not enough for buying a house and a car.>>It is not enough for me, because it is not enough to buy a house and a car.
>>It is not enough for me, since I can\'t buy a house and a car with it.To live a Korean man is required to get much money.>>To live as a Korean man, you are required to get much money.
>>A Korean man needs to earn much money.Is it funny story^^? ~~~
>>Is it a funny story?
>>Is this a funny story?
>>Is this a humorous story?
>>Is my story full of humor?
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