Hi there^^??

2014-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How about your life of this day? Was it nice? I have had a good day. Because, the temperature of this day did not lower than yesterday temerature. So, I went to hill where is backside from my house after our class. And I did a little exersing in this place. Anyway, I was glad to the wrong weather cast, because the weather cast said "the temperature would be low during two weeks."^^ I am happy because of this situation.^^ Ah ha~~ And thank you for your latter that to write dowm very many kind of expression for my life. It looks like very useful.^^ I will must remember these expressions. Thank you^^ -Homework for today- How would you feel if one of your friends names his/her child after you? Maybe, If the situation will happen, I would happy. However, This situation would not make during ten years since now. If i will save my country, it is able.^^ Ha~~ Have a good night^^Klein^^ From Kirk~~!! P.S Last one, My nephew did not come to the institute.T,T

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A good Friday morning to both of us, Kirk! I am really glad that you found the dialogue that I included in my feedback useful. Do you want me to share some more of that? Just say the word! Maybe, it would be much better if you are going to tell me the scene and we are going to construct a role play from it. How does this sound? Like for example, you will ask me to write something about friends talking about their travels, or Kirk, asking one of his friends out. This way, you will provide the theme of the role play, co I can come up with possible expressions to use in such scenario. Let\'s do it here on the board, if you don\'t mind. You may also ask your nephew to take part in our discussion. Too bad you didn\'t see him. What happened to him? Did you give him a call to check on him? Well, Kirk, I think he\'s just too busy with school work. Help him out, OK? You sure are a good uncle! Talk to you in a while, Kirk!  _Klein How about your life of this day?>>Correct OR >> How about your life for this day? >> How about your life today?Was it nice?>>CorrectI have had a good day.>>Correct!Because, the temperature of this day did not lower than yesterday temerature.>>This is because the temperature today is not lower than yesterday\'s temperature. >>It is due to the fact that it isn\'t colder today than yesterday.So, I went to hill where is backside from my house after our class.>>So, I went to the hill at the back of my house after our class. >>I then went to the hill beside our house after our conversation.And I did a little exersing in this place.>>Correct [spelling check: exercising] OR >> And I exercised for a while there.Anyway, I was glad to the wrong weather cast, because the weather cast said \"the temperature would be low during two weeks.\"^^>>Anyway, I was glad that the weather forecast was inaccurate as it was stated that the temperature would be low for two weeks.I am happy because of this situation.^^>>Correct! OR >> I\'m grateful for this!Ah ha~~ And thank you for your latter that to write dowm very many kind of expression for my life.>>Aha! And, thank you for the letter that you wrote down. There were many expressions used in daily life.It looks like very useful.^^>>It looks very useful. >>It looks like it is very useful.I will must remember these expressions.>>I will remember these expressions. >> I must remember these expressions.Thank you^^[My pleasure, Kirk!]-Homework for today-How would you feel if one of your friends names his/her child after you?Maybe, If the situation will happen, I would happy.>>Maybe, if this situation will happen, I would be happy.However, This situation would not make during ten years since now.>>However, this is not likely to happen even 10 years from now.If i will save my country, it is able.^^ Ha~~>>If I will save my country, it is possible. >>If I can save my country, it would be possible.Have a good night^^Klein^^From Kirk~~!![Good morning, Kirk! Did you have a good rest?]P.SLast one, My nephew did not come to the institute.T,T >>Correct! OR >> Last one, my nephew didn\'t come to the institute.

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