Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there^^
What did you do during a day?
Did you live the energetic life in this day?
Recent, my life have be good. Because During a week, i have had some exciting activites.
In these activity include the skiing.^^
Even though i was sick after the skiing.;;
Did you have had some good activities?
-Homework for today-
In at least 10 sentences, relate to me a story where in you missed out on something that made you feel depressed. How did you cope with it?
Hm......
I don't understand your question.
Why do you ask me what something that made me feel depressed relate you?
Otherwise, Am not i understood real mean for your question?
I have not had feeling down to you.
And, When i feel depressed myself, i listen to silent music.^^
P.S
It is my singing adress.^^
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dxktel4Bw9s
And can i write down my picture adress next time?^^
It was made some problems^^;;
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kirk! I missed this!
It has been a long time since you last posted on the board.
I think it was last year.
Welcome back, Kirk!
To answer your initial questions, as usual, I worked during the first half of the day then before heading home, I strolled at the heart of Baguio.
I also went to the market to buy something for my mom.
We had parfait! It is truly one of my favorites!
But Kirk, my day is nothing compared to yours.
Even in the past days, your activities are way exciting than mine.
I also met my friends but we just ate out and worse, I even got sick, so I didn\'t get to enjoy our supposedly last day together.
In anyways, it was fine.
About your homework, Kirk, I was asking you to relate it to me. In other words, share it with me or narrate it.
Relate does not only mean something to connect literally. It may also mean to say or tell something.
I was then asking you to say something about your experience. Relate it to me or tell it to me.
I hope everything is clear to you now, Kirk.
And before I forget, thank you so much for sharing the URL with me.
I will check it out later. I can\'t seem to open it right now. Don\'t worry, I will take down notes and of course, I will send to you my critique of your music video.
As for your pictures, no worries, Kirk, I can wait.
Just don\'t make me wait too long, please.
I will catch you in an hour, Kirk!
_Klein
Hi there^^>>Correct!What did you do during a day?>>What did you do during the day?Did you live the energetic life in this day?>>Did you live an energetic life this day?Recent, my life have be good. Because During a week, i have had some exciting activites.>>Recently, my life is good because during the week, I will have some exciting activities.
>>My life has been good because for the past week, I had some exciting activities.In these activity include the skiing.^^>>These include skiing.Even though i was sick after the skiing.;;>>Even though I got sick after skiing, I still enjoyed it.Did you have had some good activities?>>Have you had some good activities?
>>Did you have some good activities?-Homework for today-In at least 10 sentences, relate to me a story where in you missed out on something that made you feel depressed. How did you cope with it?Hm......I don\'t understand your question.>>CorrectWhy do you ask me what something that made me feel depressed relate you?>>Why are you asking me about something that made me feel depressed that is related to you? [connected with me]
>>Why are you asking me to relate something that made me feel depressed? [share it with me; say or tell it]Otherwise, Am not i understood real mean for your question?>>I did not understand the real meaning of your question.I have not had feeling down to you.>>I have not felt down with you.And, When i feel depressed myself, i listen to silent music.^^>>When I feel depressed, all by myself, I listen to soft music.P.SIt is my singing adress.^^
>>This is the site where my musid video is:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dxktel4Bw9s>>Correct!And can i write down my picture adress next time?^^>>Correct! [spelling check: address]It was made some problems^^;;
>>There were some problems with them.
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