Hi there^^??

2014-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Did you check my singing? This day i am so tired^^;; So now i am going to bed.T,T See you tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Rise and shine, Kirk! Of course, I did! I made a promise that I will listen to it, right? Here\'s what I have to say: It sure is solemn and I like it! You aren\'t the conductor there, are you? I think you are the one who is at the right side beside a lady. I am not quite sure about this because the one who took the video is so far from the stage. Nonetheless, the timber of that man\'s voice is undeniably appropriate for the song. Not everybody may appreciate it but I do. His range is even far way greater than mine. In layman\'s terms, I enjoyed listening to it. I even asked an acquaintance of mine to listen to it as well but it seems that it isn\'t his cup of tea, so I didn\'t get a good feedback from him. Instead, he commented on the technicalities of the video. He said that it was too shaky. Kirk, your church sure is a big one. It must be great to be part of it where despite being huge, all the members are sort of tightly knitted. I just have one question for you Kirk, how come Tuesday became a tiring day for you? I\'ll be waiting for your answer then. Please wait for my call later. _Klein Did you check my singing?>> Did you check the recording of our church choir presentation? >> Did you check our choir\'s song?This day i am so tired^^;;>> Correct [capitalization: \"I\"]So now i am going to bed.T,T>> Correct OR >> So now, I am going to bed. >> So I am going to bed now. >> So I will head straight to bed now.See you tomorrow. >>Correct!

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