Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How about your feeling today?
I want to you have good a feel everyday^^
Good night^^
homework for today-
Come up with a coherent and cohesive essay, answering these questions: If you are going to be deployed to another country, how are you going to react to this? What are the things that you aren't willing to leave behind? What are the things that you have to give up?
If i will go to other country, i will study other major.
Maybe, it might a special thing that i can study just this country.
(If i will go to africa, i will study about this country's culture or bionomics.)
And i want to free from money. So i would give up the money.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Kirk!
I am feeling great, as always; and I\'m always grateful because you are there to always check on me, even wanting me to feel good everyday.
Thank you so much, Kirk!
I do hope the same for you. I also pray that in due time, you will then meet your goals. Just keep on striving hard, Kirk!
If staying in Africa and studying their bionomics are a part of what your heart truly desires, it sure can be done.
Remember what I shared with you last time? \"THINK IT. DO IT!\"
And before I forget, I just read short reviews on the 10 best ski towns yesterday.
Of course, I was reminded of your trip with your friend. I want to share it with you. Here is the site: http://adventure.nationalgeographic.com/adventure/trips/best-secret-ski-towns-photos/?utm_source=NatGeocom&utm_medium=Email&utm_content=adventure_20140109&utm_campaign=Content Better check it our, Kirk!
Maybe you will have a change of heart and go to one of the places featured here instead of Africa.
Kirk, may your life be filled with so much happiness that you truly deserve!
I will catch you later!
_Klein
How about your feeling today?>>CorrectI want to you have good a feel everyday^^>>I want you to have a good feeling everyday.
>>I want you to feel good everyday.Good night^^>>Correct!homework for today->>Correct
OR >> Here is my homework for today:Come up with a coherent and cohesive essay, answering these questions: If you are going to be deployed to another country, how are you going to react to this? What are the things that you aren\'t willing to leave behind? What are the things that you have to give up?If i will go to other country, i will study other major.>>If I will go to another country, I will study another major.
>>If I will go overseas, I will take up another course.Maybe, it might a special thing that i can study just this country.>>Maybe it is a special thing that I can study it just in this country.
>>It might be a special thing, studying it just in this country.(If i will go to africa, i will study about this country\'s culture or bionomics.)>>Correct!And i want to free from money. So i would give up the money.
>>And I want to be free from money, so I would give up money.
>>I also want to free myself from money, so I would give it up.
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