Hi there^^

2014-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How are you^^? Did you had a good day? Klein~~ I checked your message from yesterday. The place is looks nice. Thankyou verymuch.^^ By the way, is this picture to take when winter sisson? When i look at this site, I could find only white color. Any way, this place looks like beautiful. Thank you so much.^^ If i will have enough and times, i will try to go there.^^haha Finally, Enjoy you your beautiful night^^ Bye. from kirk. P.S : Klein! I don't understand the word "while back" What's mean this? Home work Answer this question in not more than 10 sentences: Do you always mean business whenever you give orders to other people? Why do you say so? Do i must answer to ten sentence?^^;; I do not talking to mean business all people. Especially, To waiter and staffs of store I do not use to mean business talking. Because of, They give me just their's kind. If I give the kind words to them, They might give me to kind words better than mine

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A great day of hearts to you Kirk! How\'s your heart doing today? You may be single but when it comes to the people who love you, they are multiple! I know that your life is filled with so much love, Kirk, that\'s why you are such a nice guy, It\'s just that I think I always bewilder you with my expressions. Just bear with me, Kirk. I will truly explain everything to you with all my might. \"A while back\" can also be translated to \"a while ago\". Meaning to say, it was done earlier. Like this composition of yours, you sent it a while back, just a couple of minutes or hours ago. And to answer your question below, you do not have to answer it in 10 sentences. You just have to answer it in less than 10 sentences, not more than. I didn\'t really mean business when I wrote that instruction for your homework. Oh, Kirk, I just want to share something with you. I just came across this article and it says, \"Valentine\'s Day is Chocolate Day in disguise.\" Do you agree or disagree? I completely agree with this! If you want to know more facts about chocolates, just tell me and I will share  more with you next week. Enjoy your day, Kirk, and make it fruitful! _Klein P.S. You still owe me something, Kirk. Where are your pictures with your friends? How are you^^?>>Correct!Did you had a good day?>>Did you have a good day? [did + present tense form of the verb] >>Have you had a good day?Klein~~ I checked your message from yesterday.>>CorrectThe place is looks nice. >>The place looks nice. Thankyou verymuch.^^>>Correct [proper spacing: Thank you very much.]By the way, is this picture to take when winter sisson?>>By the way, was this picture taken during the winter season?When i look at this site, I could find only white color.>>When I looked at this site, I only found white color.Any way, this place looks like beautiful.>>Anyway, this place looks beautiful.Thank you so much.^^ >>[My pleasure!] If i will have enough and times, i will try to go there.^^haha>>If I will have enough time, I will try to go there.>>If I have some time, I will go there. Finally, Enjoy you your beautiful night^^>>Finally, enjoy your beautiful night.Bye.from kirk.>>Correct [Kirk]P.S : Klein! I don\'t understand the word \"while back\">>P.S. Klein! I don\'t understand the words \"while back\". >>Klein, I can\'t understand the expression \"while back\". >>Klein, I don\'t understand the collocation \"while back\".What\'s mean this?>>What is the meaning of this? >>What does it mean?Home workAnswer this question in not more than 10 sentences: Do you always mean business whenever you give orders to other people? Why do you say so? Do i must answer to ten sentence?^^;;>>Do I have to answer this in 10 sentences? >> Must I answer this in 10 sentences?I do not talking to mean business all people.>>I do not always mean business when talking to people.Especially, To waiter and staffs of store I do not use to mean business talking.>>Especially to waiters and other store staffs, I do not mean business when talking to them.Because of, They give me just their\'s kind. >>This is because they just give me their kind service. If I give the kind words to them, They might give me to kind words better than mine >>If I say kind words towards them, they might give back even kinder words to me. >>If I treat them kindly, they might reciprocate it.

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