Hi there^^

2014-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Thank you about your present^^ However, I do not enjoy what i do not eat this brownies.;;;; If i am staying to your hometown, i can try this....^^;; Just... I get your mind.^^ Anyway... thank you.^^ And.. Klein.. I went to my grand mother at the last friday. My grand mother do not recognize me as ever. But, I don't care. because I Know who is she. It is enough. And My answer about your question is "I will run away from the crocodile. because nobody do not survive from the crocodile, even if they do what kind of answer about this question." Run away bofore to answering.^^ P.S. Klein!! I do not understand exactly about your last question. Can i find the answer about this question with you at tomorrow morning?^^ From Kirk^^

강사 첨삭

A pleasant morning to you, Kirk!

Do not fret, you will soon have a taste of the brownies that I just ordered last week.

Honestly, I think I\'ve gotten a bit addicted to it, so I won\'t buy some this week.

It could have been much better if you brought some for your grandmother.

But I believe you gave her a special present.

I\'m wondering what it is. If you do not mind, maybe we can also talk about it in class other than the possible answers to the question that I posted as your homework.

The question is: \"Some people say that when you do not want what your friend does, it is way better to talk about it man-to-man than to just keep it to yourself and make him/her feel that you are annoyed. What is your take on this notion? Do you agree or disagree? Support your answer.\"

Like for example, when you are mad at me, do you just keep it to yourself or you tell it to me straight to my face?

Another example is when your friend\'s dress does not look pretty and you are kind of irritated by it, would you rather keep it to yourself or tell it to other people, or tell it straight to your friend, so s/he will know?

Don\'t worry, we will still talk about this in class, right? By then, I can provide more examples.

Also, about the sophism, running away from it sounds difficult as well, because if you run away, you won\'t be able to save the person captured by the crocodile, right? In anyways, this is a sophism in the first place, so there isn\'t one right answer.

Have you been asked with this kind of question before, Kirk?

Can you think of similar questions? If yes, please share them with me.

It sure is fun to think of a lot of possibilities on how we can answer such sophism even though it will take us no where. At least, our cognitive skills will really be tested!

I will catch you then later, Kirk!

Hang in there!

_Klein

Thank you about your present^^
>>Thank you for your present.
However, I do not enjoy what i do not eat this brownies.;;;;
>>However, I won\'t enjoy those brownies, since I am not going to eat them.
If i am staying to your hometown, i can try this....^^;;
>>If I am staying in your hometown, I can try it.
Just... I get your mind.^^
>>But the thought counts.

Anyway... thank you.^^
>>Correct
And.. Klein.. I went to my grand mother at the last friday.
>>And Klein, I went to the sanitarium to visit my grandmother last Friday.

>>And Klein, I visited my grandmother last Friday.
My grand mother do not recognize me as ever.
>>My grandmother didn\'t recognize me as always.
But, I don\'t care. because I Know who is she.
>>But I don\'t care because I know her condition.

>>But I don\'t case because I know who she is.
It is enough.
>>Correct
And My answer about your question is \"I will run away from the crocodile. because  nobody do not survive from the crocodile, even if they do what kind of answer about this question.\"

>> And my answer to your question is, I will run away from the crocodile because nobody can survive from the crocodile even if they do whatever their answer to this question is.
Run away bofore to answering.^^
>>Run away even before answering the question.
P.S.
Klein!! I do not understand exactly about your last question.
>>Correct

OR >> Klein, I do not exactly understand what the last question is about .
Can i find the answer about this question with you at tomorrow morning?^^
>>Can I confirm the answer to this question with you tomorrow morning?
From Kirk^^

>>Correct!

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