Hi there^^

2014-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How are you Klein?^^ How about your today was good? Mine was a little busy. During the morning, I went to the "U-Jang Hill" there is backside by my house. And after I eat lunch, I visited my school for meeting my accompanist, I sang with her accompaniment during 2 hours. And My last schedule was to exercise to swining poor.^^ How about your today?^^ -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- Answer this question in not more than 10 sentences: Have you made up your mind on what you are going to do during your overseas trip? Tell me more about it. Hmmm...... Well...... I have had many plan of active during the oversea trip. First of all, I will look around the many other nations. And i will experience almost things what i can possible. It is just a part of my plans, but it is big plan for me. I want to experence almost things during the young age what i am able to have experience. So, The first of all, I hope to go to many places. P.S Klein~ I can not to have class. Just, I could takling with you tomorrow morning. See you tomorrow^^

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Good morning, Kirk! I am doing great, as always. A bunch of thanks for always checking on me. Your schedule just never fails to amaze me. You are always on-the-go, Kirk. Mine is a bit dull compared to yours. Of course, very early in the morning, I had a short walk before heading to the office. We have this carpool together with two of my co-workers. Upon arriving in the office, I start preparing my teaching materials, together with my reports. These go on until three in the afternoon. I barely notice what happens in between because time just goes on out of hand. Next thing I know, it is time to bounce. Good thing I am still keeping up with it, somehow. After work, I went home together with one of my good friends. We had a good chat about work and just about anything. You sure know how it is like when we are with our friends, right? We just can\'t keep our mouth shut because there\'s a lot to talk about. And when I finally got home, I had some grooming, of course and I turned on the television and watched some episodes of \"Hello, Jadoo\". She is just so carefree and I can\'t help but smile when I see her does what she does best. After the program, I got back to my reading and writing tasks. I am currently working on a short story, so I switched to writing-reading mode late in the afternoon. Also, after having dinner with my mom and before going to bed, I watched an episode of HunterXHunter. The events sure are getting more intense! I have these mixed emotions even now that I am just sharing it with you. Have you checked it out, Kirk? Please do if you are no longer busy. Well, this is an overview of how my day went by yesterday. And my reaction to your answer to your homework below is, I want to do the same thing! I am even reminded of the song of Tim McGraw entitled \"Live Like You are Dying\". Kirk, since we aren\'t going to use our textbook later, maybe we can talk about these things, if you don\'t mind. I will catch you then! _Klein How are you Klein?^^>>Correct!How about your today was good?>>How about today, was it good? >>About your day, was it good? >>Was your day good? >>Did your day go well?Mine was a little busy.>>CorrectDuring the morning, I went to the \"U-Jang Hill\" there is backside by my house.>>In the morning, I went to \"U-Jang Hill\" at the back of my house. >>In the morning, I went to \"U-Jang Hill\", which is located at the back of my house. >>In the morning, I went to \"U-Jang Hill\", which is just behind my house.And after I eat lunch, I visited my school for meeting my accompanist, I sang with her accompaniment during 2 hours.>>And after I ate lunch, I visited my accompanist in school and we rehearsed for two hours. >>After lunch, I went to school to meet my accompanist and we rehearsed my audition piece for two long hours. >>After I had my lunch, I head straight to school and met my accompanist. We rehearsed my audition piece for two hours.And My last schedule was to exercise to swining poor.^^>>And my last task on schedule was to exercise at the swimming pool.How about your today?^^>>Correct OR >> How about you, what was your schedule or day like? >>How about you, what did you do?-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-Answer this question in not more than 10 sentences: Have you made up your mind on what you are going to do during your overseas trip? Tell me more about it.Hmmm......>>CorrectWell...... I have had many plan of active during the oversea trip.>>Well, I have had many plans for my active overseas trip. >>Well, I have had many plans for my activities on my overseas trip.First of all, I will look around the many other nations. And i will experience almost things what i can possible.>>First of all, I will look around many other nations and I will experience almost all things if possible. >>First of all, I will look around different places and I will experience all possible things from food to recreational activities.It is just a part of my plans, but it is big plan for me.>>It is just a part of my plans but is a big plan for me.I want to experence almost things during the young age what i am able to have experience.>>I want to experience many things at a young age where I am still able to do so. >>I want to experience everything while I am still young.So, The first of all, I hope to go to many places.>>Correct OR >> So, first and foremost, I hope to land on many places.P.SKlein~I can not to have class.>>P.S. Klein, I cannot have the class with the book. >> I cannot prepare the textbook. >> I cannot use my textbook. Just, I could takling with you tomorrow morning.>>I could just talk with you tomorrow morning without it. >>I could just talk with you tomorrow morning. >>But I can talk with you tomorrow morning. >>Let us just talk about anything under the sun. >>Let us just have a good chat.See you tomorrow^^ >>Correct

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