HI there~
학생이 쓴 원문
Long time no see. Klein.
How about your recent life?
In fact, recent my life is not enjoyable.
Anyway, I will chearing up myself. Thank you.^^
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
Put your thoughts into a cohesive and coherent essay.
What dish makes your mouth water?
My best food is the pasta be made White cream source.
I like greasy food very well.
What do you like what kind of food.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kirk!
Indeed, it has been a long time since you last posted something on the composition board.
Kirk, just relax. Have time for self-reflection.
Think of happy memories and foresee how you want yourself to be a couple of days, months, or years from now.
Declare that your life is enjoyable and it will be!
Cheer up, Kirk!
And speaking of food, I like Carbonara, too.
We sure know that greasy kinds of food aren\'t good for our health but they are just so sumptuous, aren\'t they?
But Kirk, always eat in moderation, OK?
And to answer your question, the food that I like the most is fruit salad!
I sure live in a tropical country and tropical fruits are the best of their kind.
Kirk, talking about food makes me crave for such delicious dishes!
Let\'s talk more about Carbonara later, if you don\'t mind.
I\'ll catch you later!
_Klein
Long time no see. Klein.>>Correct!
OR >> Long time, no see, Klein.How about your recent life?>>Correct
OR >> How is your recent life?
>>How have you been recently?In fact, recent my life is not enjoyable.>>In fact, my recent life is not enjoyable.
>>In fact, my recent life hasn\'t been enjoyable.Anyway, I will chearing up myself.
>>Anyway, I will cheer myself up.
Thank you.^^
[Kirk, always smile!]-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-Put your thoughts into a cohesive and coherent essay.What dish makes your mouth water?My best food is the pasta be made White cream source.>>The best food for me is pasta with white cream sauce.
>>The best food for me is Carbonara.I like greasy food very well.>>I like greasy food very much.
>>I like greasy food so much.What do you like what kind of food.
>>What kind of food do you like?
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