Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How about your evening?
Is it good?
I was meet my undergrade man of my University at evening.
I had a dinner and talking about the music with him.
(He is studing the "Piano Accompaniment" to "Manhattan Music College" in USA.)
I had a good time.
How about you?^^
Home work for today.
Relate in detail the most treacherous climb you have had in your life.
I have a question before the begining, Is "Climb" among this sentence mean to go to the mountain highest?
Regretably, I never have any experience to climb mountain.^^
What is the real mean of this sentence?
P.S
And, Don't worry about this situation.
Never mind.^^
Have a good night^^
From Kirk~~
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Kirk!
My evening went well.
My grandmother from my father\'s side will stay with us for good, I think.
Good for you, you had a hang out with one of your good old friends.
It\'s nice to catch up with them once in a while.
Are you thinking of furthering your studies, Kirk?
And Kirk, I think that friend of yours can speak English well. He needs to, because he is studying in the USA.
Would you like to study there, too?
I think it will be nice!
Whatever your decision may be, as long as you are doing it for your own good and you aren\'t hurting anybody, let it be.
Think about it, Kirk!
And as for the \"treacherous climb\", I hope I have given light to it a while ago.
Also, do your own reading if you have time.
Keep it up, Kirk!
Have a great day!
_Klein
How about your evening?Is it good?>>Correct!
I was meet my undergrade man of my University at evening.>>I met my undergraduate \"man\" in university in the evening.
>>I met my undergraduate pal in our university in the evening.I had a dinner and talking about the music with him.>>We had dinner and talked about music.
>>I had dinner and a chat about music with him.
>>We talked about music over dinner.
(He is studing the \"Piano Accompaniment\" to \"Manhattan Music College\" in USA.)>>He is studying \"Piano Accompaniment\" at Manhattan College of Music in the USA.
>>He is taking up a course on \"Piano Accompaniment\" at Manhattan College of Music, USA.I had a good time.How about you?^^>>CorrectHome work for today.>>Homework for today:
>>Here\'s my homework for today:Relate in detail the most treacherous climb you have had in your life.I have a question before the begining, Is \"Climb\" among this sentence mean to go to the mountain highest?>>I have a question before going to my answer, does \"climb\" in this sentence mean to go to the peak of a mountain?Regretably, I never have any experience to climb mountain.^^>>Regrettably, I never had any experience to climb a mountain.What is the real mean of this sentence?>>What is the real meaning of this sentence?
>>What does this sentence really mean?P.SAnd, Don\'t worry about this situation.Never mind.^^Have a good night^^From Kirk~~
>>Correct!
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