Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi^^
Did you have a good day today?
Mine was the same to usual day.
Study English and sing a song and to do sometheing......^^
In fact, the life of repeatng day is a little boring.
I would find some favorite thing for me.^^
What is your favorite activities on these day?
Homework for today.
What case or act would you like to impose a moratorium on and why?
Is this question to hard for me.
Because, I am not understood about this word "moratorium".
Hm...
For exemple, When i lead my choir, if their make a noise, i am loud to the choir "Be quiet"
But it is not to like me.^^
May is it a good answer?^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kirk!
You started my day with blast!
I was impressed by how you differentiated the uses of the prepositions ON, IN, and AT.
I ought to thank you for listening to what I had to say as well.
And of course, my rating for your composition today is 4/5.
You might have gotten a bit confused with the meaning of moratorium but the fact that you tried to answer it the best way you can, your effort sure reached the ceiling.
Kirk, I like it when you always settle for second best.
I can sense your eagerness to really surpass the current level of your English communication skills.
I am just so proud of you!
I am being sentimental here because today sure is our last day of classes.
Just keep safe, Kirk.
And before I forget, moratorium is some kind of suspension of activity.
With your answer, perhaps, we can add that if the choir members are going to be too noisy, then you are going to cancel some of your scheduled rehearsals until they learn their lesson.
It can be a form of moratorium.
Or maybe, you can also suspend the members who really disturb your practice and make them reflect on what they have done.
Nonetheless, as you mentioned, it is not like you.
Imposing a moratorium on something isn\'t really your thing because of your good nature.
Stay kind, Kirk!
Also, to answer your question, some of my favorite activities these days are hanging out or catching up with my loved ones, watching animations, making arts and craft, and of course, HAVING SOUND CHATS WITH YOU.
I guess this is too much of a flattery.
To wrap this up, Kirk, I just want you to hold on to your aspirations.
Keep on striving hard to reach your goals.
You are the best of your kind! In fact, there\'s no one else like you, so make it known to mankind that you are THE ONE!
Until we meet again, Kirk!
Best regards to you and to your family.
You are always in my prayers,
_Klein
Hi^^>>Correct!Did you have a good day today?>>CorrectMine was the same to usual day.>>Correct
OR >> Mine was as usual.Study English and sing a song and to do sometheing......^^>>Correct [spelling check: something]
OR [Mine was as usual: study English, sing a song, and do something else.]In fact, the life of repeatng day is a little boring.>>Correct
OR >> In fact, life that is like a routine is a little boring.I would find some favorite thing for me.^^>>I would look for my favorite things for myself.
>>I want to find some of my favorite things as a treat for myself.What is your favorite activities on these day?>>What are your favorite activities these days?
>>What is your favorite activity these days?Homework for today.What case or act would you like to impose a moratorium on and why?Is this question to hard for me.>>Is this question too hard for me?
>>This question is too hard for me.Because, I am not understood about this word \"moratorium\".>>This is because I cannot understand the word \"moratorium\".
>>This is because I did not completely understand the meaning of the word \"moratorium\".Hm...
[What are you thinking about, Kirk?]For exemple, When i lead my choir, if their make a noise, i am loud to the choir \"Be quiet\">>For example, when I lead my choir and they make noise, I loudly shout, \"BE QUIET!\"But it is not to like me.^^>>But it is not like me.
>>But it is not so me.May is it a good answer?^^
>>Can this be a good answer?
>> Is this a good answer?
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