Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening dear my friend!!^^
Did you work well? How about your feeling. Is it good?
My feel is so nice.
Because, The weather of this day is very nice.
Good temperature and good sunshine and cool air condition...
Almost was good.^^
How about you Miss. [Name]?
Homework for today.
Your asking is so good.
Because, almost people want to be made a hit from other persons.
Me too.
I like the situation that i am conducting my choir to make a hit with my choir members said to " You are best conductor!!".
It is funny words, because almost pastors said "All christians must be modest!!".
Is it funny.^^
Anyway, It is my best like words of praise.^^
강사 첨삭
The weather here in our country is fine as well, Kirk!
It sure affects our mood.
May you have a cool day then, Kirk!
Like I said earlier, don\'t be grumpy.
I\'m just teasing you because I know that you are such a nice person.
Kirk, let me tell you this: YOU ARE THE BEST CONDUCTOR THAT I KNOW!
I know that you are also modest because whenever I tell you that you look amazing, you kind of say \"NO\", but you do, Kirk!
You are very polite as well. You may simply call me \"Klein\" Kirk.
Miss. [Name] can be translated to Little Miss, so I think it does not suit me.
My dearest friend, Kirk, take good care of yourself and I\'ll catch you again tomorrow!
Do not stay in the pool too long, OK?
You may be a good swimmer but you need some rest, too.
Until then, my friend!
_Klein
Good evening dear my friend!!^^Did you work well?
How about your feeling.
Is it good?>>Correct!My feel is so nice. Because, The weather of this day is very nice.>> I feel so nice because the weather today is very nice.Good temperature and good sunshine and cool air condition...>>Correct
OR >> The temperature is mild with cool air and splendid sunshine.Almost was good.^^>>Almost everything is good.How about you Miss. [Name]?>>CorrectHomework for today.>>Correct!
Your asking is so good. Because, almost people want to be made a hit from other persons.>>Your question is so good, because almost all people want to make a hit from other persons.Me too. I like the situation that i am conducting my choir to make a hit with my choir members said to \" You are best conductor!!\".>>Me too, I like this situation when I am conducting my choir. When I make a hit, my choir members tell me, \"You are the best conductor!\"It is funny words, because almost pastors said \"All christians must be modest!!\".>>These are funny words, because almost all pastors say, \"All Christians must be modest!\"Is it funny.^^>>Is it funny?
>>It is funny!Anyway, It is my best like words of praise.^^
>>Anyway, these are the best praises for me.
>>Anyway, these are the best flattering words for me.
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