Hi There^^

2014-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi~ Klein^^ How are your feel today?^^ Is it good? Like you to say, I think, If the weather today in the philippines is good, your feel is the same the weather.^^ I want to you have good something everytimes. Well... I hope to you happy.^^ (But, I know that your country is the wet season.^^) -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- Essay: What new trend would you like to make a go of? Answer this question in not more than 10 complex sentences. Hm... it is so hard question. Because recent, To have a new trend idea is not easy to me. And Korean bagic educations have not been creative since Korean war.^^;; So many younger people's ideas are not creative. Almost things imitate other country's.(It is just my opinion.^^) So almost new trend things are not creative. Maybe, If i have some good ideas of trend, it may the part of new machine for human life. Is it a good answer?^^;;

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A happy Thursday to both of us, Kirk! Indeed, yesterday, we had a fine weather so I was feeling so light. Thanks for always wishing me well. Kirk, how I hope you will also have something great all the time because I do wish you happiness! You are my friend now, so I will certainly be happy if I know that you are happy and affluent. And Kirk, I think you are so ahead. It is still the dry season here in the Philippines. It won\'t last long though, due to global warming. We will soon experience the wet season in May or June. Moving on to your homework, your answer is VERY GOOD! It sure is your opinion so I can never say that it is right or wrong. Self-expression is the key! You don\'t know how happy I am after reading your composition. Kirk, thank you for sharing this with me! I just want to know, what kind of part of machine would that be? We already have prosthetics and that of the man-made heart. What would be yours? Relate this with me later, OK? Thank you in advance Kirk! Wait for my call later! _Klein Hi~ Klein^^>>Correct! How are your feel today?^^>>How are you feeling today?Is it good?>>CorrectLike you to say, I think, If the weather today in the philippines is good, your feel is the same the weather.^^>>Like you said, I think if the weather today in the Philippines is good, your condition must be the same as the weather.I want to you have good something everytimes.>>I want you to have good times. >>I want you to have something good every single time.Well... I hope to you happy.^^>>Well, I hope you are happy.(But, I know that your country is the wet season.^^)>>But I know that in your country, it is the wet season.-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-Essay: What new trend would you like to make a go of? Answer this question in not more than 10 complex sentences.Hm... it is so hard question. Because recent, To have a new trend idea is not easy to me.>>Hm.. it is a hard question because recently, having a new trend for me is not easy. >>Hm..this question is so hard to answer because recently, I can\'t get in a new trend easily.And Korean bagic educations have not been creative since Korean war.^^;;>>And Korean basic education has not been creative since Korean war. >>Besides, Korean basic education has not been creative and innovative since Korean War.So many younger people\'s ideas are not creative.>>Correct >> So many young people don\'t have creative ideas. >>This is why many young people don\'t have many creative ideas.Almost things imitate other country\'s.>>Almost all things are imitations of other countries\'. >>We imitate almost everything that we see from other countries.(It is just my opinion.^^) >>Correct! So almost new trend things are not creative.>>So almost all new trends are not creative.Maybe, If i have some good ideas of trend, it may the part of new machine for human life.>>Maybe, if I have some good ideas for a trend, it may be a part of a new machine for human life.Is it a good answer?^^;; >>Correct!

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