hi there
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there.
Klein~ i have a request to you.
Please, won't you write down your comment to my bord?
Because, my computer caused a little problems....
So, i can't use my computer now.
Please wait me, until when i make answer about your question.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Kirk!
You are such a great student! Despite the fact that you are having some problems with your computer, you still found a way to send this in to inform me about it. Thank you so much, Kirk!
Regarding your request, I think it would be much better for me to just complete everything, so you will have something to read after you have your computer fixed.
Besides, I just love sharing lesson points with you about English because I know that you read them with an open-mind.
So Kirk, I will just complete my feedbacks for you then just read them as soon as your computer is already working properly.
Kirk, don\'t worry about it. I can wait for your answer to the questions that I will be posting as your homework.
Hang in there my friend!
I will call you later.
_Klein
Hi there.Klein~ i have a request to you.>>CorrectPlease, won\'t you write down your comment to my bord?>>Please, won\'t you write down your comment on my board?
>>Please, won\'t you post your comment on my board?Because, my computer caused a little problems....>>This is because my computer caused little problems. [little problems - many]
>>This is because my computer caused a little problem. [a little problem - just one]
*[Your computer is the cause of the problem.]
>>Something might have caused some problems on my computer.
*[There\'s something wrong with your computer because something else caused it. Perhaps, a virus or other incompatible applications with the system you are using.]So, i can\'t use my computer now.>>CorrectPlease wait me, until when i make answer about your question.
>>Please wait for me, until I answer your question.
>>Please wait for my answer to your question.
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