hi there

2014-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there. Klein~ i have a request to you. Please, won't you write down your comment to my bord? Because, my computer caused a little problems.... So, i can't use my computer now. Please wait me, until when i make answer about your question.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Kirk! You are such a great student! Despite the fact that you are having some problems with your computer, you still found a way to send this in to inform me about it. Thank you so much, Kirk! Regarding your request, I think it would be much better for me to just complete everything, so you will have something to read after you have your computer fixed. Besides, I just love sharing lesson points with you about English because I know that you read them with an open-mind. So Kirk, I will just complete my feedbacks for you then just read them as soon as your computer is already working properly. Kirk, don\'t worry about it. I can wait for your answer to the questions that I will be posting as your homework. Hang in there my friend! I will call you later. _Klein Hi there.Klein~ i have a request to you.>>CorrectPlease, won\'t you write down your comment to my bord?>>Please, won\'t you write down your comment on my board? >>Please, won\'t you post your comment on my board?Because, my computer caused a little problems....>>This is because my computer caused little problems. [little problems - many] >>This is because my computer caused a little problem. [a little problem - just one] *[Your computer is the cause of the problem.] >>Something might have caused some problems on my computer. *[There\'s something wrong with your computer because something else caused it. Perhaps, a virus or other incompatible applications with the system you are using.]So, i can\'t use my computer now.>>CorrectPlease wait me, until when i make answer about your question. >>Please wait for me, until I answer your question. >>Please wait for my answer to your question.

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