HI there^^.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there~
This story looks like to have a lot of means.
I know that is inspired story for people.
But sometimes, escape from emergency might be the better choice.^^
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
Answer this question in not more than 15 sentences:
What would you do if you louse up a very important group project?
If i louse up a very important project of my gruop, i will admit my misstake within my part.
And i will talk about recovering this project with all members.
Because, It is meaningless to talk about work had done.
Just, important thing is to find solutions.
Isn't it?
P.S
My answer is short.^^;;
But, It is all my opinion.^^
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Kirk!
What\'s up with you today?
Your message evoked a different feeling. Indeed, stories are based on real-life circumstances.
Some parts were only played to add effect to the story, the thing that we call \"magic\".
Kirk, you must be so ready to relate the story to me tomorrow.
By the way, I was informed that my manager already uploaded the book.
I think you can already download and preview it.
Tell me what you think about it.
Also, regarding your answer to the question, it may be short but you have answered it sufficiently.
Problems are meant to be solved to avoid bearing more problems.
We have to admit our fault and not blame others.
These may be cliches but the fact that they are called \"cliches\" is that they bear truth that has been proven for years and is continuously validated.
Let\'s call it a day, Kirk!
I\'m excited to listen to your story tomorrow.
Until then!
_Klein
Hi there~>>CorrectThis story looks like to have a lot of means.>>This story looks like it has a lot of meanings.
>>This story seems to have lots of meanings.I know that is inspired story for people.>>I know that is inspired by people.But sometimes, escape from emergency might be the better choice.^^>>Correct-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-Answer this question in not more than 15 sentences:What would you do if you louse up a very important group project?If i louse up a very important project of my gruop, i will admit my misstake within my part.>>Correct! [spelling check: group; mistake]And i will talk about recovering this project with all members.>>Correct!Because, It is meaningless to talk about work had done.>>This is because, it is meaningless to talk about the work that had been done.Just, important thing is to find solutions. Isn\'t it?>>The important thing is to find solutions, isn\'t it?
>>The only important thing is to come up with solutions, isn\'t it?P.SMy answer is short.^^;;But, It is all my opinion.^^
>>Correct
OR >> My answer may be short, but it\'s all that I can say about this matter.
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