Hi there^^

2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein^^ How are your week end?^^ I have had a good weekend, because, the choir exercise was finshed perfectly.^^ In fact, I didn't expect to exercise was finshed perfectly.^^ So, I am satisfactory.^^ homework~ Answer these questions with all honesty -Do you think your English communication skills are looking up? Why do you say so? I do not agree youropinion, because, I am not satisfactory about my English skills yet. Just, I certainly have a good confidence for English communication. So, I may talk to people who use to English.^^ P.S Klein~~ Tomorrow, I will go to reserve korean army. So, I can't have our class. Sorry~~ See you tuesday.^^

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Good morning, Kirk! It\'s a relief to hear that your weekend went perfectly well. Mine was not as superb as I would have wanted it to be. It\'s because of my own doing, so there\'s no one to blame but myself. Well, good thing it\'s over, so I can start with a new one! Besides, today is the last day of March, so I need to put my acts together for the new month. And, Kirk, you may be right about your answer below that\'s why you are striving really hard to meet your goals of becoming a better English communicator. All I can say is KEEP IT UP! As for our class today, I checked my schedule but you did not put the class on hold for today. If it won\'t change until our class time, I will still have to call you then Kirk. Since it is a bit early in the morning, you can change your schedule using your account. You do know how to do it because you\'ve done it before, Kirk. I will catch you then tomorrow, if not today. Keep safe! _Klein Hi Klein^^>>Correct!How are your week end?^^>>How was your weekend? >>How were you last weekend?I have had a good weekend, because, the choir exercise was finshed perfectly.^^>>Correct OR >> I had a good weekend, because the choir exercise was finished perfectly.In fact, I didn\'t expect to exercise was finshed perfectly.^^>>In fact, I didn\'t expect it to end this way. >>In fact, I didn\'t expect for it.So, I am satisfactory.^^>>Correcthomework~Answer these questions with all honesty -Do you think your English communication skills are looking up? Why do you say so?I do not agree youropinion, because, I am not satisfactory about my English skills yet.>>I do not agree with your opinion, because I do not have satisfactory English skills, yet. >>I do not agree with your opinion, because my English skills are not yet satisfactory.Just, I certainly have a good confidence for English communication.>>I just have confidence in my English communication skills. >>I am just confident with my English communication skills.So, I may talk to people who use to English.^^>>So, I may talk to people who use English. >>So, I can talk to English-speaking people.P.SKlein~~Tomorrow, I will go to reserve korean army.>>Klein, tomorrow, I will go out to reserve a slot for my service in the Korean army.So, I can\'t have our class.>>Correct OR >> So, I can\'t take the class. [Klein, tomorrow, I will reserve a slot for my service at the Korean army so I won\'t make it to our class. Sorry~~>>Correct See you tuesday.^^ >>See you on Tuesday! >>I will just see you on Tuesday.

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