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2014-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein^^ Is this day good for you?^^ I have studied English now from 9 AM. But, It is very difficult for me, because you make sentense hardly.T,T Of course, I am comprehended to your feedback broadly, but I can't do that detailedly. Maybe, I do not know well about sentenses structure. P.S Maybe, even if you will write the adress of the websit down ,So Even if i can find the book, I can not read it to last page until our next class. Is this sentense right? If you think that this sentence is wrong and you are comprehended this sentense, would you fix(or reconstruct) this sentense? And I have one more question whatever you wrote down on your board this Friday... "Only then can we say that we have become better." Why do you make the sentense like that? "Only then we can say that we have become better." is my opinion. Why did you change "Verb and Noun"'s order? I don't understand.T,T _Homework for today_ If i have a long resting time and then i have enough money, I will must

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\"Only then can we say that we have become better\" means that after we meet the requirements stated, we can then say that we have improved or changed to a better person. The order of the words is like this because it is a conditional statement with the omission of the partner of then, which is IF. If you want to interchange the order of the words, \"can\" and \"we\", we should include IF. Take a look at this: \"If we met all these, then we can say that we have become better.\" Nice observation, Kirk! This just proves that you are studying English well. Please do keep it up. I will do my very best to make my feedback as simple as possible. But take note that I will still have to challenge you every now and then with complex ones, so you will strive harder. May you continue to have a great afternoon, Kirk! I\'ll catch you tomorrow! _Klein Hi Klein^^>>Correct!Is this day good for you?^^>>Correct!I have studied English now from 9 AM.>>Correct!But, It is very difficult for me, because you make sentense hardly.T,T>>But it is very difficult for me because you always make complex sentences. Of course, I am comprehended to your feedback broadly, but I can\'t do that detailedly.>> Of course, I comprehended your feedback broadly, but I can\'t do that in detail. Maybe, I do not know well about sentenses structure.>>Maybe, I do not know well about sentence structures.P.SMaybe, even if you will write the adress of the websit down ,So Even if i can find the book, I can not read it to last page until our next class.>>Maybe, even if you will write down the address of the website and I find it, I can not read it until the last page until our next class.Is this sentense right?>>Correct!If you think that this sentence is wrong and you are comprehended this sentense, would you fix(or reconstruct) this sentense?>>If you think that this sentence is wrong and you comprehended it, would you fix or reconstruct it for me?And I have one more question whatever you wrote down on your board this Friday... >>And I have one more question about what you wrote down on your board last Friday.\"Only then can we say that we have become better.\" >>CorrectWhy do you make the sentense like that?>>Correct [spelling check: sentence]\"Only then we can say that we have become better.\" is my opinion.>>Correct OR >> In my opinion, it should be like this: \"Only then we can say that we have become better.\" Why did you change \"Verb and Noun\"\'s order? >>Why did you interchange the verb and the noun\'s order?I don\'t understand.T,T >>Correct_Homework for today_If i have a long resting time and then i have enough money, I will must >>If I have a long resting time and then I have enough money, I must do it. >>If I have a long resting time and enough money, I will do what I must.

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