Hi there^^

2014-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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First of all, Thank you for your kind feedback. And next, I am sorry what I forgot to send my letter about yesterday homework.T,T I think that i was very tired yesterday. Because, I did not push sending butten.;;;Hahaha... Anyway, thank you for your fast answer.^^ And I understood for your explanation. I will check your feedback one more time tomorrow.^^ Know... i am so tired...Hmmmm.... See you next morning.^^ Bye -Homework for today- Does your current life living high off the hog outweigh your harrowing past experiences? Expound your answer. Is your question that now is better than past time? Then My answer is "Right" Of course, I do not make enough money yet, now my heart is richer than my past days.^^ Is my answer preper?^^ Good night^^ P.S Maybe, I might write down wrong sentenses to be grammatical on the baord. Understand me. Because, I am so sleepy now....;;

강사 첨삭

Wow, Kirk! Your use of transition devices is highly commendable! I\'m just wondering if one of remarks below is sarcasm, saying that my response is fast. I actually sent it a bit late, so you must be teasing me. Nice one! Your sense of humor is getting through. Due to fatigue, you even forgot to click the \"SEND\" button yesterday. What an unfortunate turn of events! Nonetheless, I still admire the fact that you tried to accomplish your tasks despite your unwanted physical and mental conditions. I even like your answer to the question below. You sound so poetic! Your heart must be the richest these days! I\'ll just catch you later then, Kirk! Hang in there. _Klein First of all, Thank you for your kind feedback.>>Correct OR >> First of all, thank you for your kind words in your feedback.And next, I am sorry what I forgot to send my letter about yesterday homework.T,T>>And next, I am sorry that I forgot to send my letter about the homework yesterday. >>Next, I am sorry for forgetting to send my letter and homework yesterday.I think that i was very tired yesterday.>>Correct! OR >> I think I was very tired yesterday.Because, I did not push sending butten.;;;Hahaha...>>Because, I did not click the \"SEND\" button. >>This is because I did not click on the \"SEND\" button.Anyway, thank you for your fast answer.^^>>Correct OR >> Anyway, thank you for your quick response.And I understood for your explanation.>>And I understood your explanation.I will check your feedback one more time tomorrow.^^>>Correct!Know... i am so tired...Hmmmm....>>Now, I am so tired.See you next morning.^^ Bye>>Correct!-Homework for today-Does your current life living high off the hog outweigh your harrowing past experiences? Expound your answer.Is your question that now is better than past time?>>Are you asking if \"NOW\" is better than the \"past time\"? >>Is your question about now being better than the past?Then My answer is \"Right\">>Then my answer is \"YES\".Of course, I do not make enough money yet, now my heart is richer than my past days.^^>>Of course, I do not make enough money yet, but my heart is richer now than in the past days.Is my answer preper?^^>>Correct [spelling check: proper]Good night^^>>Correct!P.SMaybe, I might write down wrong sentenses to be grammatical on the baord.>>I might have written ungrammatical sentences on the board. >>Maybe, I have posted ungrammatical statements on the board. Understand me. Because, I am so sleepy now....;; >>Correct OR >> Please understand my situation because I am so sleepy now.

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