Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Kirk!
To start up our day, let us read this verse again:
\"NOTHING HAD CHANGED
When I went back to my old school
nothing had changed.
Well, OK,
the place had closed down.
Doors stood wide,
windows had lost their glass,
ceilings had fallen.
Travellers had camped in the dining-room,
and left their names on the walls.
Wind blew
through the rooms where I had sat for so long
and learnt so little.
Rubbish piled up in the corners.
But nothing important had changed.\"
-Evan Stabetsi
You liked it, didn\'t you? Actually, I love it very much that\'s why I shared it with you.
Perhaps, in one of these days, I will also share it with Ashley.
As for your answer below, you pointed out many sensible things.
There must be some kind of reason be it personal or professional before forcing someone to go on furlough, right?
Given the thought of your answer, I will give you a perfect score.
Just check the corrections below so as to polish your grammar Kirk.
Subject-verb-agreement is very important. Nonetheless, you did pretty well!
Also, allow me to say that it is my pleasure to introduce beautiful Ashley to you.
I can\'t wait for you two to be friends!
We are not yet done talking about you, though.
She really wants to know you better through me, so just hang in there.
For your questions about her, just save them for our next meeting.
I will answer them the best way I can.
No worries, I will build you up and leave a good impression of you!
Study hard, Kirk!
_Klein
Hi Klein~
>>Correct!
You are so nice for me!
>>Correct [For me, you are so nice./In my opinion, you are so nice.]
OR >> You are so nice to me./You show kindness to me.
And I am thankful to your help every times.
>>And I am thankful to your help every time. [every/each time-singular]
Your letter have been adviced to me, and i think that the last one is the best.
>>Your letter has given me advice and I think that the last one is the best. [letter is singular so use HAS; letters-HAVE]
In fact, I have spent time when i study English to look for new words.T,T
>>In fact, I have spent time studying English to look for new words.
>>In fact, I have spent time studying English as I looked for new words.
In fact, Do not have many word in my head...;;
>>I do not have many words in my head. [many-words]
(Anyway, It looks like my complex.)
>>Correct
Thank you to give me the writing by Evan Stabetsi.^^
>>Thank you for giving me the verse from Evan Stabetsi.
It looks like very usefully.^^
>>It looks like it is very useful. [with the quantifier LIKE, put the pronoun IT and the be-verb IS]
>>It looks very useful.
-Homework for today-
Would it hit you like a ton of bricks if you were forced to go on furlough without valid reasons?
I think that this is very good asking.
>>I think that this is a very good question. [in place of asking, we have QUESTION]
My opinion is \"allmost things have the reason over onething.\"
>>My opinion is, almost all things have the reason over one thing. [almost needs a qualifier - all, everybody, and the like]
Even if i get the furlough from the firm forcedly,i will follow the decision.
>>Even if I get the furlough from the firm forcefully, I will follow the final decision.
And, the best importhant thing is to make me usefully for my firm.
>>And, the most important thing is to make myself useful to the firm.
If so(so then), They do not make me to have furlough no reason.
>>If so, they won\'t make me go on furlough with no reason.
Maybe, If the firm do not see through my abillity, the best way is to come out from there.^^
>>Maybe, if the firm does not see through my ability, the best way for me to do is to get out from there. [firm-collective/singular-DOES]
P.S
Thank you to introduce me to her.^^
>>Thank you for introducing me to her.
>>Thank you for introducing her to me.
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