Hi there^^

2014-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Was today good for you? I have had a good day today from this morning.^^ And thank you for your saying that you introduced me to her nicely.^^ However, of course i like this situation, but i am worried about this. Because, if she doesn't like this situation, it might be doing discourtesy. If she like that we go on to know each other, of course i like this too. By any chance, If she unlike this situation, you are able to stop doing that anytime.^^ (Of course, I like this situation.^^!!!) Thank you!! My dear friend Klein.^^ -Homework for today- Describe in detail your perfect kind of junket. Hm... If you think about the trips that are got free, I am the man of to be blessed.^^ Because of, I have traveled very many countrys for our choir's mission almost times for nothing! Is it unbelievable?!! So, I have got very many experience from this travelings.^^ I think that is just God's Blessings.^^ Isn't it?^^ PS If she want to get more relationship with me, you will tell me about this

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Kirk! You sure are so inspired right now! I think I should have done this earlier. You are studying harder these days with no sweat because your heart is filled with so much happiness, which is one of the greatest feelings! As for your travels, you truly are blessed because you strive hard to share God\'s Words. May you stay down to earth, Kirk! Brace yourself for more of God\'s rewards for your hard work. Perhaps, one of those would be meeting and being friends with Ashley. She is getting interested in you, so in one of these days, you two are likely to meet. I will definitely keep you posted. Hang in there Kirk! _Klein Was today good for you?>>Correct!I have had a good day today from this morning.^^>>Correct!And thank you for your saying that you introduced me to her nicely.^^>>Correct!However, of course i like this situation, but i am worried about this.Because, if she doesn\'t like this situation, it might be doing discourtesy.>>Of course, I like this situation, but I am still worried because if she doesn\'t like it, I might be doing discourtesy >>Of course, I like this situation; however, I am still worried because she might find me discourteous.If she like that we go on to know each other, of course i like this too.>>If she likes us to go on knowing each other more, of course, I like this too. >> If she wants us to get to know each other more, of course, I would want it as well.By any chance, If she unlike this situation, you are able to stop doing that anytime.^^>>By any chance, if she does not like this situation, you can stop doing it anytime. >>By any chance, if she doesn\'t have any liking to this set-up, you can stop with what you are doing anytime. (Of course, I like this situation.^^!!!) >>CorrectThank you!! My dear friend Klein.^^>>Correct OR >> Thank you my dear friend, Klein.-Homework for today-Describe in detail your perfect kind of junket.Hm...If you think about the trips that are got free, I am the man of to be blessed.^^>>If you think about the free trips that I have gone through, I am a blessed man.Because of, I have traveled very many countrys for our choir\'s mission almost times for nothing!>>I have travelled to very many countries for our choir\'s mission with almost no fee for many times.Is it unbelievable?!!>>Correct!So, I have got very many experience from this travelings.^^>>So, I got very many experiences from these travels. [THESE-for plural noun] I think that is just God\'s Blessings.^^ Isn\'t it?^^>>I think those are God\'s Blessings, aren\'t they? PSIf she want to get more relationship with me, you will tell me about this >>If she wants us to have a relationship, please let me know.

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