Hi there.^^

2014-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ Are you go on a good day today?^^ Now, I am preparing to go to library for studying another subject.^^ Because, My home is that make me do not concentrate. So, I will go to the libary after finish this note.^^ What is your life of this day? I want to you share with your a daylife.^^ And I like that Ashley has a good feel with me. Maybe, if she want to communicate with me, will you tell her "she is able to do this."?^^ Can you send my message to her?^^ Send my message to her.^^ Finally, I like your way that you teach me. Almost all the time, first try is easy to fail. So, Don't hasitate to try a new way.^^!!! Cheer up!! My dear friend^^ -Homework for today- Hm... It is the top secret about me. Almost all the people know that i could not drink a alcohol and haven't drunken alcohol never once. But, I have done drinking alcohol alone just three times in all my life.;;;; It is my top secret.;;; Then, what is your top secret, Klein? I want to that i know .^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Kirk! What subject are you going to study in the library? Is it your City Library? You know what, when I was still a bit young, going to the City Library was always part of my weekly to-do list. I miss those good old days, together with my sweet friends. Well, at least I get to see them once in a while when we aren\'t too busy. I guess this is how adult life works. Do I sound too sentimental? I think I am being carried away again. The heat must have gotten into my system. But seriously, Kirk, are you quite interested in our friend Ashley? I have this feeling that somehow, you are daydreaming about her. Perhaps, you are drawing a picture of her in your mind, aren\'t you? I really want to share a picture of her with you, if you don\'t mind. As for your message to her, call it a message relayed! Just be very patient, Kirk. You will definitely meet her when the time is ripe. Brace yourself then! Also, for the methods that we are going to employ in our classes, I will see to it that you are going to learn a lot. Just meet me halfway, Kirk, which I know you will. Last but not the least, now I know your top secret! This is so unbelievable! It\'s like I need to wake myself up from a funny dream. We\'ve known each other for a couple of months now, yet I am continuously discovering queer things about you. Do you really want to know my top secret? But if I am going to disclose it to you, it will never be a secret anymore. Nonetheless, here it goes. I don\'t want to keep it as a top secret forever after all. Take note of it, Kirk. \"I am in love with the idea of being in love.\" That\'s it! So, Kirk, study hard! Just let me know if I can be of help to you tomorrow. Until then! _Klein Hi there^^>>CorrectAre you go on a good day today?^^>>Are you going on with a good day today?Now, I am preparing to go to library for studying another subject.^^>>Now, I am preparing to go to the library to study another subject.Because, My home is that make me do not concentrate.>>I just cannot concentrate at home. >>In my opinion, my home isn\'t conducive to learning.So, I will go to the libary after finish this note.^^>>So, I will go to the library after finishing this note. >>So, I will head off to the library after I finish this note.What is your life of this day?>>What is your life this day?I want to you share with your a daylife.^^>>I want you to share your daily life.And I like that Ashley has a good feel with me.>>And I like/want Ashley to have a good feeling for me.Maybe, if she want to communicate with me, will you tell her \"she is able to do this.\"?^^>>Maybe, if she wants to communicate with me, will you tell her, \"She is able to do this\"? >>maybe, if she wants to communicate with me, will you tell her that she can?Can you send my message to her?^^>>CorrectSend my message to her.^^>>CorrectFinally, I like your way that you teach me.>>Finally, I like your way of teaching me. >>Finally, I like the way you teach me.Almost all the time, first try is easy to fail.>>Correct OR >> Almost all the time, it is easy to fail on the first try.So, Don\'t hasitate to try a new way.^^!!!>>Correct! [spelling check: hesitate]Cheer up!! My dear friend^^>>Correct-Homework for today-Hm...It is the top secret about me.>>Correct!Almost all the people know that i could not drink a alcohol and haven\'t drunken alcohol never once.>>Almost all the people I am acquainted with know that I could not drink alcohol and haven\'t drunken alcohol even once.But, I have done drinking alcohol alone just three times in all my life.;;;;>>Correct OR >> But I have drunken alcohol alone three times, so far.It is my top secret.;;;>>Correct!Then, what is your top secret, Klein?>>Correct! I want to that i know .^^ >>I want to know it.

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