Hi there^^

2014-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein^^ Did you have a good weekend?^^ I have had a good and busy week end.^^ Because of next sunday is Easter.^^ During a all weekend, I spent time for Easter cantata pratice of my choir.^^ I have had many jobs, whatever conducting choir is regarded hardest.T,T And Klein! I am worried about you latter. Because, your letter looks like to misunderstand. In our last class, meaning of my talking was just "I want more communications with you." or "If you don't have enough time, i want to English communicate another people in extra time." You're my good friend and teacher. I am happy to have the time with you.^^ Thank you all most all times.^^ -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- If i will got this happening, I will must capture this person. Because, If the man have special reasons, It is just crime. Maybe, If the man want me to help him, I would give to help to him do my best in my ability.^^

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Good afternoon, Kirk! I can say that my weekend was cool enough. It wasn\'t really that great because my appointment with one of my good friends was cancelled. But Kirk, I have completed some of my masterpieces! How I hope I can show them to you. Maybe next time! As for your Easter cantata, God bless you and the other choir members, Kirk! Share the spirit of Easter with others and share it with me by recording it! And you know what, we have this so-called in-house activity for Easter. We call it the \"BEST-CLAD EASTER EGG COMPETITION\". How does that sound to you? I\'m really excited for this event because the creativity of teachers will be showcased. Before I get carried away again, I just want to let you know that I was being too sentimental with my letter last time. I understood you perfectly. I just wanted to tease you. I can really be playful sometimes. But I think a part of it is really true! Many evening teachers are great! To wrap this up my dear friend Kirk, you really are very nice. I suppose you are the kind of person who is willing to help anybody to the best of your ability. Just keep it up! Wow, you have another composition here. I\'ll check it out, so goodbye for now. Catch you on the next composition board! _Klein Hi Klein^^Did you have a good weekend?^^>>CorrectI have had a good and busy week end.^^>>Correct OR >> I had a busy but good weekend.Because of next sunday is Easter.^^>>This is because next Sunday is Easter.During a all weekend, I spent time for Easter cantata pratice of my choir.^^>>During all weekend, I spent time for the Easter cantata practice of my choir.I have had many jobs, whatever conducting choir is regarded hardest.T,T>>Correct OR >> I have had many jobs but conducting for a choir is the hardest.And Klein! I am worried about you latter. Because, your letter looks like to misunderstand.>>And Klein, I am worried about your letter because it sounded like you misunderstood me.In our last class, meaning of my talking was just \"I want more communications with you.\" or \"If you don\'t have enough time, i want to English communicate another people in extra time.\">>In our last class, I meant to say that I just want more \"communications\"/discussions with you or if you don\'t have enough time, I can communicate with other people during their extra time.You\'re my good friend and teacher.>>CorrectI am happy to have the time with you.^^>>Correct OR >> I am happy to have some time with you.Thank you all most all times.^^>>Thank you for almost all times.-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-If i will got this happening, I will must capture this person.>>If this will happen to me, I must capture this person. >>If this will happen to me, I will capture this person. Because, If the man have special reasons, It is just crime.>>Because, if the man has special reasons, it is just a crime. >>This is because the man must have special reasons for committing this crime. Maybe, If the man want me to help him, I would give to help to him do my best in my ability.^^ >>Maybe, if the man wants me to help him, I would give him a hand to the best of my ability. >>Maybe, if the man wants my help, I will do my best to help him.

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