Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel to let our hair down when we talk about a girl.
Because I am [Name] a man.^^;;;; hahaha
It is just joking.^^
In fact, i felt to let our hair down when you talk about my problems.
Because I felt that your mind is real.
So,I think you who you are my good friend around me.^^
Sometimes, I don't understand your word whatever i know your meaning.^^
And, you to introduce your friend "Ashley", I think thankfully.^^
It is not reason that you introduce a girl.
I know your thinking that i will need to communication practice in English with other persons.
Thank you.^^ Almost all things.^^
Have a good day.^^
P.S
Klein!! In fact, I am looking for the book of "all is fair in love and war"
But I cloudn't find this book on the homepage of "www.ebook.com".T,T
Do you konw another site?
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kirk!
Just let your hair down while talking with me and also with others. This way, you can get the words out from your mind.
But of course, this does not mean that you will not think twice when you are about to say something related to sensitive matters.
Nonetheless, it\'s good that when we talk about girls, you feel like you let your hair down. That is great!
At least, you feel at ease talking about such stuff with me; not to mention your problems.
I may not be all-knowing but I know that I can be of help to you in some ways most especially when I know what you really are going through.
There\'s just one hindrance to your meeting with Ashley, Kirk.
She is feeling a bit uneasy because you and I haven\'t actually officially met in person.
I know that you are nice but it\'s really different when talking over the phone, right?
So in the meantime, she\'s thinking about meeting you heedfully.
Let\'s just wait for what decision she\'ll come up soon.
We will definitely discuss it.
As for your request, Kirk, first you need to be a member of ebook.
By then, you can browse all the books available on the website.
If you won\'t be able to find it, I will just share it with you if you don\'t mind.
Take care, Kirk!
Enjoy the rest of the afternoon.
I got to bounce now.
_Klein
I feel to let our hair down when we talk about a girl.Because I am [Name] a man.^^;;;; hahaha>>I feel like letting my hair down when we talk about a girl because I am just a man.It is just joking.^^>>I am just joking.
>>This is just my joke.In fact, i felt to let our hair down when you talk about my problems.Because I felt that your mind is real.>>In fact, I feel like I let my hair down when we talk about my problems because I sense that your mind is real.So,I think you who you are my good friend around me.^^>>So, I think you are one of the good friends around me.Sometimes, I don\'t understand your word whatever i know your meaning.^^>>Sometimes, I don\'t understand your word/s but I know what you mean by those.And, you to introduce your friend \"Ashley\", I think thankfully.^^>>And I think thankfully for introducing your friend Ashley to me.It is not reason that you introduce a girl.>>It is not the reason that you introduced a girl.I know your thinking that i will need to communication practice in English with other persons.>>I know what you are thinking. I need to practice my English communication skills with other persons/people.Thank you.^^ Almost all things.^^>>Thank you for almost all things.Have a good day.^^>>CorrectP.SKlein!! In fact, I am looking for the book of \"all is fair in love and war\">>CorrectBut I cloudn\'t find this book on the homepage of \"www.ebook.com\".T,T>>Correct [spelling check: couldn\'t]Do you konw another site?
>>Correct [spelling check: know]
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