Hi there^^

2014-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there.^^ Last ewwkend and monday tuesday were busy day to me. I went to my father's construction field.^^ haha Each day, from early morning to night, I worked there.ㅡㅡ;; But, I am ok. because, I think that the work was just exersice.^^. And, you asked me under this question ~~ "What would you recommend to a friend who has a scanty income?" My answer is always simple. Reason of you are leaving poor people is that you haven't had a enough effort. If you have done your best about your profession, now you have a enough money. (It is not to mean that the persons will become billionaire certain.) If the man have had a good effort, effort will not lie to the man. Is it enough?^^ Good night. P.S And i read to your advices letter about the memory and attention. Always thank you.^^ And I tried something of those each days.

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Good afternoon, Kirk! I am having an active week as well, and I like it! In my opinion, it is better than staying as a bum. I ought to thank you for helping your father out. You his only son, so even if he won\'t ask for your help, it sure is inevitable for him to be in need of it every now and then. Do look after your wonderful family, Kirk! You just mentioned that it is some kind of an exercise, so it must be good for your health. Stay fit my friend! And with your answer to the question that I posted as your homework, I can never argue with you about that. It is so true! I would just like to add something. I think \"luck and fate\" also play important roles in one\'s life. This is just what I think. If you say otherwise, feel free to raise your rebuttal tomorrow. I will also give more pieces of advice on how we can somehow sharpen our memory and improve more of our skills, so keep on reading. Thank you for making me feel that you appreciate my effort in sharing such with you. Keep safe Kirk! May you continue to have a good afternoon. _Klein Hi there.^^>>CorrectLast ewwkend and monday tuesday were busy day to me.>>Last weekend, Monday and Tuesday were busy days for me. >>Last Saturday, Sunday, Monday, and Tuesday, I was so busy.I went to my father\'s construction field.^^ haha>>Correct!Each day, from early morning to night, I worked there.ㅡㅡ;;>>CorrectBut, I am ok. because, I think that the work was just exersice.^^.>>But I am [Name] because I think that my work is just an exercise. >>But I am fine with it because I treated it as a form of exercise.And, you asked me under this question ~~>>And you asked the question below.\"What would you recommend to a friend who has a scanty income?\">>CorrectMy answer is always simple.>>CorrectReason of you are leaving poor people is that you haven\'t had a enough effort.>>The reason you are poor is that you haven\'t exerted enough effort.If you have done your best about your profession, now you have a enough money. >>If you have done your best in your profession, by now you should have enough money.(It is not to mean that the persons will become billionaire certain.)>>It does not necessarily mean that these persons/people will become billionaires.If the man have had a good effort, effort will not lie to the man.>>CorrectIs it enough?^^Good night.>>CorrectP.SAnd i read to your advices letter about the memory and attention.>>And I read your pieces of advice on memory and attention.Always thank you.^^>>Thank you, as always. And I tried something of those each days. >>And I try some of those each day.

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