Hi there^^

2014-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How about your a day?^^ I had a lunch like to your say from yesterday.^^ I did not overeat for a lunch.^^ And Klein~! Mayby, Did she ask to you about my highest.? Hmmmmm... If she will know my highest, she wouldn't want to meet to me.^^haha Although It is not almost all things, many Korean girl wish to meet a man who is higher than 180cm.^^;;;; My highest is just 174cm.;; Say that once again, If she know that, she would be disappointed certainly with me.^^ Suddenly, I am worried about that.;;;; -homework for today- Why do you think some Koreans who study English falter when they are approached by English-speaking foreigners? Maybe, It is the problem that the people might be scared to foriegners and watched to other people. Many Koreans have many a few scrime about foreign people. I don't know why they do that. But it is truth. (I am same. Of course, now i don't) And, Many Koreans are conscious for other people's eyes.^^ I think that is fun.^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kirk! You really are very obedient and I appreciate it. I\'m so blessed to have known a student/friend like you.

Continue to watch what you eat. Stay fit and healthy!

As for your height, we just had a funny chat related to that. Honestly, she doesn\'t really make a big fuss on  it.

It\'s fine with her if a guy is just 170 cm. tall. It sure is not the biggest deal ever. I just became curious of it.

Don\'t worry, everything will go well.

What took me by surprise is your note below, stating that you were once one of those people who do something wrong to foreigners.

I\'m not quite sure if I got your point right, but this is how I interpreted it.

Correct me if I\'m wrong, Kirk.

I will catch you then tomorrow.

Keep safe!

_Klein

How about your a day?^^
>>How about your Wednesday?

>> How about your day today?
I had a lunch like to your say from yesterday.^^
>>I had lunch like what you advised two days ago.
I did not overeat for a lunch.^^
>>I did not overeat for lunch.
And Klein~! Mayby, Did she ask to you about my highest.?
>>And Klein, maybe she asked about my height.

>>And Klein, did she ask about my height?
Hmmmmm... If she will know my highest, she wouldn\'t want to meet to me.^^haha
>>Hmmm  If she will know my height, she wouldn\'t want to meet me.

>>If she will learn about my height, she might not want to meet me.
Although It is not almost all things, many Korean girl wish to meet a man who is higher than 180cm.^^;;;;
>>Although it is not about everything, many Korean girls wish to meet a man who is taller than 180 cms.
My highest is just 174cm.;;
>>My height is just 174 cm.

>>I am just 174 centimeters tall.
Say that once again, If she know that, she would be disappointed certainly with me.^^
>>If you tell her that, she would certainly be disappointed at me.
Suddenly, I am worried about that.;;;;
>>Correct
-homework for today-
Why do you think some Koreans who study English falter when they are approached by English-speaking foreigners?
Maybe, It is the problem that the people might be scared to foriegners and watched to other people.
>>Maybe, it is a problem that people might be scared of foreigners and be watched by other people.
Many Koreans have many a few scrime about foreign people.
>>Many Korean have many crimes inflicted on foreign people.
I don\'t know why they do that.
But it is truth.

>>I don\'t know why they do that but it is the truth.

(I am same. Of course, now i don\'t)
>>Correct
And, Many Koreans are conscious for other people\'s eyes.^^
>>And many Koreans are conscious of other people staring at them.
I think that is fun.^^

>>Correct!

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