HI there^^~

2014-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Almost all times, you have given to me many good questions. Among all questions, it is the best question for me i think. To study english..... Infact, I don't like learn other languge because it is so hard to me.^^ Recent days, i have thought something about my future and those are shaked and changed during a day on my head. "Do i going to good and best way?" I ask to myself each whole day. And now i am asking it. In fact, I haven't got a best way for my life.hahaha^^ And, to study english is just a way for my better life. And, I want to be used the way for making a good family. For making my family happy just need getting a good job and making more maney and upgrading my social position in Korea. I want to do these work so i am learning to study English.^^ Because, I am responsible about my family.^^ Of course, It is also something that i feel satisfactions. Is it a good answer to you?^^ Have a nice day Klein.^^ P.S Klein~!! How can i meet her tomorrow?

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Kirk!

It\'s nice to know that you appreciate the questions that I have posted as your homework.

They may be random ones but you somehow managed to come up with sound answers to many of them.

I even get to know you better with your answers.

The best part is, you get to practice writing and enhance your English communication skills as a whole.

I will do my very best to help you achieve your goals.

Let\'s talk more about your last query later, Kirk!

I will catch you in a while.

_Klein

Almost all times, you have given to me many good questions.

>> Almost all times, you have given me many good questions.

Among all questions, it is the best question for me i think.

>> Correct
OR >> Among all those questions, I think, this is the best for me.

To study english_

>> Correct [capitalization: English -proper noun-]

Infact, I don\'t like learn other languge because it is so hard to me.^^

>> In fact, I don\'t like learning other languages because it is so hard for me.

Recent, i have thought something about my future and those are shaked and changed during a day on my head.

>> Recently, I have thought of something about my future and it is shook and changed during a day in my head.
>> Recently, I have thought of some things about my future and those are shook and changed in my head within a day.

\"Do i going to good and best way?\" I ask to myself each whole day.

>> \"Am I going to do good or best?\" I ask to myself each whole day.
>> \"Do I do well or take the best way?\" I ask to myself for the whole day.
And now i am asking it.

>> Correct
OR >> And now, I am asking this same question to myself.

In fact, I haven\'t got a best way for my life.hahaha^^

>> Correct
OR >> In fact, I haven\'t done my best so far in my life.

And, to study english is just a way for my better life.

>> Correct! [capitalization: English]

And, I want to be used the way for making a good family.

>> And, I want it to be used as a way for making a good family.

For making my family happy just need getting a good job and making more maney and upgrading my social position in Korea.

>> To make my family happy, I just need to get a good job to make more money and upgrade my social position in Korea.

I want to do these work so i am learning to study English.^^

>> Correct [learning to love studying]
OR >> I want to achieve all of these, so I am studying English. [studying English]

Because, I am responsible about my family.^^

>> This is because I am responsible for my family.
>> This is because my family is my responsibility.

Of course, It is also something that i feel satisfactions.

>> Of course, it is also something that I feel satisfying.
>> Of course, it is also my source of satisfaction.
>> Of course, it is also something satisfying.

Is it a good answer to you?^^

>> Correct
OR >> Is it a good answer to your question?

Have a nice day Klein.^^

>> Correct!

P.S
Klein~!! How can i meet her tomorrow?

>> Correct

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