Hi there^^
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This is utterly delightful, Kirk!
It is nice to hear that you had a good weekend with the people that you treasure the most.
I was also touched by your remark below that your solution to all your problems is very simple - being thankful to your family.
As for my question, the \"last straw\" refers to the worst thing that you could do that may make your family disown you.
Like for example, you lied to your mother about you having a child. This is just an example, OK?
Another example would be hitting your father because he keeps on nagging at you. Again, this is just an example. I know that you are not capable of doing such.
This is why I want to know what could be the last straw for your family.
Think about it carefully Kirk.
May you continue to have a great afternoon.
Keep safe!
_Klein
Klein^^ How were your last weekend?^^
>>Klein, how was your weekend?
>>Klein, how were our previous weekends?
I have had a good weekend with my family and church member.^^
By the way, How was your firm\'s easter fastival? Who is the winner.?^^
I want to know.^^
>>Correct [spelling check: festival]
Homework for today.
What is this one thing that you consider is the \'last straw\' for your family before they start hating you forever?
(Klein. I have a request about that sentence.
>>Correct
I know that sentence\'s mean however I don\'t understand detail.
>>I know that sentence\'s meaning; however, I don\'t understand the details.
>>I know what that sentence means but I don\'t get all the details.
Please, Can you change this sentense easier.)
>>Can you please make it simpler?/Could you please make this sentence simpler?
Hm...
I had happened many bad things among my family.
>>I had many bad experiences with my family.
>>My family had many bad experiences.
>>Many bad things had happened among my family members.
It had been serious problems, It is trauma with my family until now.
>>They had been serious problems, so my family still has trauma from it.
But, I get a simple way that is sollution about these problems.
>>But I got a simple solution for these problems.
It is just giving a word of thankfulness to my family.
>>Correct
OR >> It is showing how grateful I am to my family, always.
So, Our family are happy now.^^
>>So, our family is happy now.
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