Hi there^^

2014-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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To answer with your question is here.^^ [이름] is very hensome guy who think it hemself.^^ He has many best confidence himself and then it is real. And he know the way to take care of his waman. I think that he is a good guy around me. He like himself and then love. Also, he is loving his family.(I know it is not grammatical.)^^ Of course, it is have been be kept now though.^^ He has a good partnership with his friends and his people. And even though very many good things about him, I can not explain all thing. Because, This board is not enough. At last, I know it is so git words but it is just expression for my confidence. So. i want you to think it is not git.^^ The reason of to write this latter is just i like me very much. Until now i have not lived to have many confidence myself. But from now i am liveing my another life.^^ I hope your mention is same to mine.^^

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A very good morning to the \"handsomest\" [이름]! I am really ecstatic, knowing that you are letting your hair down as you converse with me. Thank you for being so transparent to me, Kirk. Now I can somehow see through you, though haven\'t really met each other in person. The genuine \"you\" is just so queer, like me! You are not some kind of a true-blue GIT and never will be completely, maybe just a bit! Since the space here isn\'t enough, perhaps you can resume with your confession later. I will catch you then Kirk and let\'s have one of our best chats! _Klein To answer with your question is here.^^>>My answer to your question is here.[이름] is very hensome guy who think it hemself.^^>>[이름] is a very handsome guy according to himself. >>[이름] thinks he is a very handsome guy.He has many best confidence himself and then it is real.>>He is confident about himself and so it must be real.And he know the way to take care of his waman.>>And he knows how to take care of his woman. >>And he knows the way to take care of his woman.I think that he is a good guy around me.>>I think he is a good guy.He like himself and then love.>>He likes and loves himself. >>He is a narcissist.Also, he is loving his family. >>Also, he loves his family. >>He also loves his family. (I know it is not grammatical.)^^ >>CorrectOf course, it is have been be kept now though.^^>>Of course, it has to be kept until now, though.He has a good partnership with his friends and his people.>>CorrectAnd even though very many good things about him, I can not explain all thing.>>And even though there are very many good things about him, I can not explain them all.Because, This board is not enough.>>Correct OR >> This is because the space on this board is not enough.At last, I know it is so git words but it is just expression for my confidence.>>At last, I know I sound like a git but this is just my expression of confidence.So. i want you to think it is not git.^^>>Correct OR >> So, I do not want you to think my words are git or I am git.The reason of to write this latter is just i like me very much.>>The reason I wrote the latter statement is I just like myself very much.Until now i have not lived to have many confidence myself.>>Until now, I have not lived with a great deal of self-confidence or self-esteem.But from now i am liveing my another life.^^>>But from now on, I am going to live another kind of life.I hope your mention is same to mine.^^ >>I hope your opinion is the same with mine.

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