Hi there^^

2014-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ I am thankful for your message, because it is so serious problem. But, I think of your teaching skills are so good and skillful. So, i am satisfied with almost all your teaching skills. Sometimes, I just felt dissatisfaction about my speaking skill. Becasue manytimes, I could not express my thoughts in English. Maybe, I may be weak in English grammar. Recently, I began to study basic grammar class for my studing TOEIC. But, To speak English for my thought is so hard for me until now.T,T I am going to have many effort to speak English.^^ Good night. And will have keeping your styles.^^ I want it.^^ Homework for today. Hm.... Every each days, I have manytimes for my English study. But, I think that is not effective. So, i thought effective a way what i can study English. It is to master grammatical skills. So, I am making my perfect grammatical usage do my best. (Of course, almost all my compositions are wrong.^^;;)

강사 첨삭

Kirk, not all your compositions are wrong!!! In fact, this one is relatively well-made! There are \"CORRECT\" marks and there were minimal mistakes in some other statements, which can definitely be corrected. I rephrased some for you so you will be guided. Our dearest Kirk, for you to enhance your skills, you ought to read many English materials. Read some of them out loud. Exposure to the language you are trying to master is the key. Watch as many English movies as you can and listen to many English songs. These are just some of the most common ways to get you going. Can you still remember the animations that I shared with you last time? I still watch most of them during my leisure time, so you can do it as well. Try to speak in English, even though you are alone. You can talk to yourself, Kirk! [IN ENGLISH] And of course, during our session, just speak up. Don\'t be anxious! Honestly, I understand most of your remarks. If I miss some of your points, I do ask you to explain them to me further, so please do not fret. You can do it! Do not get tired of reading my feedback are reviewing some of your statements that I try to rephrase. If you want me to clarify something, just tell me to do so. I will catch you then later, Kirk! We can talk about this one a little further later. Until then! _Klein Hi there^^>>Correct!I am thankful for your message, because it is so serious problem.>>I am thankful for your message, because it is a serious problem. >>I am thankful for your message, because it is a very serious problem. >>I am thankful for your message, because it is a problem that is so serious. [Lesson Points: You just missed the article \"A\". Some use \"VERY\" and \"SO\" interchangeably, but this is not always the case. There are some environments where is either of the two is only applicable just like in the environment above. When we say \"environment\" in linguistic terms, it refers to the words used in the statement alone along with its context. Try to check the second and third sentences above and see for yourself the differences between the two.]But, I think of your teaching skills are so good and skillful.>>But I think your teaching skills are so good. >>But I think your methods of teaching are so good and skillful. >>But I think of your teaching skills as good. >>But I think of your teaching methods as good and skillful.So, i am satisfied with almost all your teaching skills.>>Correct [capitalization: \"I\"]Sometimes, I just felt dissatisfaction about my speaking skill.>>Sometimes, I just feel dissatisfaction on my speaking skill. >>Sometimes, I just feel dissatisfied with my speaking skill.Becasue manytimes, I could not express my thoughts in English.>>Correct [spelling check: because; many; times]Maybe, I may be weak in English grammar.>>Maybe, I am weak in English grammar. >>I may be weak in English grammar.Recently, I began to study basic grammar class for my studing TOEIC.>>Recently, I began to take a basic grammar class for my TOEIC. >>Recently, I began to study basic English grammar in TOEIC.But, To speak English for my thought is so hard for me until now.T,T>>But, to speak out my thoughts in English is so hard for me until now. >> But to speak out my thoughts in English is still hard for me.I am going to have many effort to speak English.^^>>I am going to exert much effort to speak English!Good night.>>CorrectAnd will have keeping your styles.^^>>And I will keep up with your styles.I want it.^^>>Correct! OR >> I want them. [many styles]Homework for today.Hm.... Every each days, I have manytimes for my English study.>>Each day, I have much time for my English studies. >>Every day, I have much time for my English study. [Lesson Points: \"MANY\" for countable nouns \"MUCH\" for uncountable nouns]But, I think that is not effective.>>CorrectSo, i thought effective a way what i can study English.>>So I thought of an effective way to study English. >>So I thought of a way that is effective for me in studying English.It is to master grammatical skills.>>Correct OR >> It is to master grammar skills. >>It is to master the rules of English grammar.So, I am making my perfect grammatical usage do my best.>>So I am doing my best to perfect my grammar. >>So I am doing my best to perfect my usage of English words and stringing them together grammatically.(Of course, almost all my compositions are wrong.^^;;) >>Correct

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