Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How about your feel today?
I had a good time with my parents Because today is "Parents day"
So, We had a good time and good Dinner.^^
But, I did not send your message to my parents, because they are sleeping now.^^
If they will wake up tomorrow, I will send your message to my parents.^^
-Homework for today-
What would knock you for a loop.
Recently, My account balance Knock me for a loop.
Because, It is decreasing everyday.T,T
Maybe, This is the time for making money.^^;;
강사 첨삭
To answer your question right ahead, yesterday, I felt so great. For today, I think I\'m getting into the mood.
Your remarks below truly made me smile and your answer to your homework make my laugh.
Too bad I was not able to send a bouquet of pink carnation to your mother and white ones for your father.
What were your presents for them?
I want to know more about your marvelous family dinner, Kirk.
If you don\'t mind, share it with me later.
Maybe we can also talk about how to make money to stop your account from knocking you for a loop.
I will catch you in a while!
_Klein
How about your feel today?>>How about your feeling today? [feel-verb; feeling-noun]I had a good time with my parents Because today is \"Parents day\">>Correct
OR >> I had a good time with my parents because today is Parents\' Day.
>> I had a good time with my parents because it\'s Parents\' Day.So, We had a good time and good Dinner.^^>>Correct!
OR >> We had a good time over dinner.But, I did not send your message to my parents, because they are sleeping now.^^>>Correct
OR >> But I haven\'t sent your message to my parents, since they are asleep now.If they will wake up tomorrow, I will send your message to my parents.^^>>Correct
OR >> I will send your message to my parents tomorrow as soon as they wake up.-Homework for today-What would knock you for a loop.>>What would knock you for a loop?Recently, My account balance Knock me for a loop.>>Recently, my account balance knocked me for a loop. [earlier past]
>>Recently, my account knocks me for a loop. [ongoing]Because, It is decreasing everyday.T,T>>CorrectMaybe, This is the time for making money.^^;;
>>Correct
OR >> Maybe, it\'s time for me to make money!
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