Hi there^^
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Good morning, Kirk! I My Tuesday went by swiftly but I think it\'s a good one.
How about yours? Thank you so much for always wishing me well. How I hope your days are going to be so much better from then on.
Let me just applaud you for using a good word - \"AGONIZE\"! Nice one!
Laziness is really something that we all have in us. In your case, you know that you have to kiss it goodbye but you just can\'t immediately.
It is going to be a long process my dear friend. Trust me!
But then again, I know that you can do it if you are really determined to do so.
I will be cheering you on Kirk!
Kiss it goodbye and make your life more wonderful than it is now.
As for my answer to this same question, it is quite sentimental so brace yourself.
*I know that I will have to kiss my youth goodbye very soon, but I don\'t think I can handle it.
We have talked about one of the most daunting topics before -\"AGE\" -, so I think you know where I am coming from.
It sure feels great to be young but it can never last forever. At some point in our life, we have to GROW UP literally and figuratively.
Nonetheless, we can still keep \"youthfulness\" in us to some extent.
I think this is too much for today, so I will say goodbye now Kirk. But I will never kiss you goodbye! These two expressions sure are different.
I will catch you again on the next composition board.
_Klein
How was your day today?^^
>>Correct
I want you to have good daily life.
>>I want you to have a good daily life.
>>I want you to have a good time every day.
>>I want you to have good days.
Have a good night^^
>>Correct
-Home work for today-
What is this something that you have to kiss goodbye but you just couldn\'t?
I have had many bad habit in my life.
>>I have had many bad habits in my life.
And the worst one of all is that to be lazy.T,T
>>And the worst one of all is that of being lazy.
>>And the worst one is being lazy.
In fact, While i have time to study, i am study hard of course.
>>In fact, when I have time to study, I have to study hard, of course.
>>In fact, when I have time to study, of course I have to study hard.
But, It is the problem that i spend to too much time for preparing study.^^;;
>>But the problem is that I spend too much time to prepare to study.
>>But the problem is that I spend too much time for my preparations.
(Almost all time, I agonize about begining study or not.T,T)
>>Almost all the time, I agonize about beginning to study or not.
>>Almost all the time, I agonize over deciding on whether to start studying right ahead or not.
If i less the time, i can use my a day effective.^^
>>If I lessen this time agonizing about this matter, I can use my time more effectively.
>>If I refrain from doing such, I can use my time more effectively.
As a result, almost all things are the product of laziness.;;;;
>>Correct!
OR >> In the end, almost all things are the PRODUCT of laziness!
So, i want to throw this habit out.^^;;
>>Correct
OR >> So, I want to throw this habit away.
>>So, I want to kick this habit out.
>>So, I want to kiss this habit goodbye.
What is your kissing goodbye?^^
>>What do you want to kiss goodbye?
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