Hi there^^

2014-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there.^^ Do you having a great evening, Miss. [Name]?^^ Because the studing Enlish grammar, I have had a busy day. In fact, Nevertheless, I have spent a long time for studying English grammar, it have not been effective. So, Sometimes, I am tired.^^;; However, I know it is to be happy situation.^^hahaha I will try again more and more.^^ Have a great night^^ I wish you who have a good sleep.^^ Bye Klein. -Homework for today- I can not empathize with your question. But, I have not had any kidding areound. Nevertheless, sometimes I used to do something that i kid around myself, it was just misstake.^^;; So, I can not answer your question.^^

강사 첨삭

*Hello, Mr. [Name]!How is your day going so far?Are you having a great time studying English grammar?It sure is tiring! I feel for you my dear Kirk. Honestly, I find it boring, so it is much better to study it with a very good friend.I really want to help you and I should, so I will browse all my grammar books this coming weekend and get all the main lesson points that I may share with you.Just let me know if something is bothering you anytime!You may kid around, but not too much. Everything should be taken or done in moderation.Keep safe, honorable Kirk!_KleinHi there.^^ >>Correct!Do you having a great evening, Miss. [Name]?^^ >>Are you having a great evening, Miss. [Name]?[present progressive: be verb/ -ing]Because the studing Enlish grammar, I have had a busy day. >>Because of studying English grammar, I have had a busy day.In fact, Nevertheless, I have spent a long time for studying English grammar, it have not been effective. >>In fact, I have spent a long time studying English grammar; nevertheless, it has not been effective.So, Sometimes, I am tired.^^;; >>So sometimes, I get tired of it./ So sometimes, I can't help but be sick of it.However, I know it is to be happy situation.^^hahaha >>However, I know that I need to be happy./ However, I know that I need to view it optimistically.I will try again more and more.^^ >>Correct!Have a great night^^ >>Correct!I wish you who have a good sleep.^^ >>I wish you a good sleep./ I wish you will have a good sleep.Bye Klein. >>Correct!-Homework for today-I can not empathize with your question. >>Correct!But, I have not had any kidding areound. >>But I have not had any kidding around moments.Nevertheless, sometimes I used to do something that i kid around myself, it was just misstake.^^;; >>Nevertheless, I used to do something sometimes like kid myself around, which was a mistake.So, I can not answer your question.^^  >>Correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·