Hi there^^
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What can you say about kids these days? Compare them with us when we were kids.
The children of today are so good.(Just in Korea. I don't know all kids in the world.^^)
They have a good brain and education conditions and enough teacher....ect.
It is better than my childhood conditions.
But, many Korean kids do not contain enough manner and etiquette.
I think that is problem of their parents, almost all parents do not teach the kids manner.
The parents think that is best teaching just learning subject and their major in the school.
So, I don't so like kids of today.
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*Kids these days are really different from us when we were still at their age.Your key ideas below really hit the spot!I even like your disclaimer, stating that it is only in Korea, because it can be tough to make this generalization without supporting details.But I'm just reminded of this silly thought: Do you agree that we are born on the exact date as dictated by nature because we are really meant to live in that certain era? It's like we are meant to be born today not tomorrow because that's how it works! It is fate, destiny, or whatever you may call it.On the other hand, there is also this concept of reincarnation. Oh, Kirk, I may be thinking too much now. I just can't help it! There's just too much that I try to understand but I just can't. These thoughts running in my mind are starting to drown me.I'm just so glad that I can share them with you. Thank you so much Kirk for always hearing me out.You know that I am also open to whatever you want to say, so just share it with me.Until then Kirk!_KleinWhat can you say about kids these days? Compare them with us when we were kids.The children of today are so good.(Just in Korea. I don\'t know all kids in the world.^^)
>>Correct!They have a good brain and education conditions and enough teacher....ect.
>> They have a good mind and education background, enough teachers, etc./They have a good mind due to their good education background with enough teachers.It is better than my childhood conditions.
>>Correct!But, many Korean kids do not contain enough manner and etiquette.
>>Correct!I think that is problem of their parents, almost all parents do not teach the kids manner.
>>I think that is the problem of their parents, who mostly do not teach their kids good manners.The parents think that is best teaching just learning subject and their major in the school.
>>Some parents think that the best lesson to be learned is a major or specific subject in school.So, I don\'t so like kids of today. >>Correct!
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