Hi there^^

2014-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ How is your day today.?^^ For a day, I had a good resting time.^^ So, My sickness had done.^^ (I am thankful for your prayer.^^) And I read your letter and your Hangul letter.^^ I think you have a good Hangul writing skill.^^ Even though a little mistake is in your sentense, your composition skill is so nice.^^ Chonunchakkaeyo=>Chonun chak hae yo. Chonunlan-gugoul=>Chonun han-gul-oul (I think th others are perfect.) If you want to study more Korean language, you can require me.^^ Anytimes.^^ -Homework for today- What do you kick yourself for the most? I kick myself what I made my first girl friend left from me.^^ I think it is the most mistake in my life.^^ PS Klein. I apologize to you for a situation, that I can not have our class tomorrow. Because I will go to the field.T,T So, i think that we may not have the time for our class. So sorry... But, If you will leave some message for me, i will study about your letter.^^ Good night.^^

강사 첨삭

A pleasant morning to you Kirk! Thank goodness you are feeling well right now. But wait a second, you just got back on your feet yet you are going to exhaust yourself again! Please take things easy Kirk. Never ever overwork! Take as many breaks as you can, OK? Your answer to your homework even sounds so depressing. You must be feeling so much pain while thinking about it and writing it down. Here\'s something that may lift your spirit up: Kirk, I truly believe that what happened was definitely planned. It is something that can\'t be avoided. You may laugh at me if I say that it is FATE, but it would make you feel much better if you will believe in it. Besides, you are still a bit young, so there\'s so much in store for you in life. Never kick yourself for something that will only put you down to the abyss of nothingness. Well, this is so much for today! I won\'t share my composition in Korean today because it might just drive you nuts. Have a good rest, so you can take the class on Wednesday. Stay safe, Kirk! _Klein Hi there^^ How is your day today.?^^>>Correct!For a day, I had a good resting time.^^>>Correct OR >> I had a good resting time for one whole day.So, My sickness had done.^^ >>So my sickness had gone. >>So I have recovered from sickness. (I am thankful for your prayer.^^)>>CorrectAnd I read your letter and your Hangul letter.^^>>CorrectI think you have a good Hangul writing skill.^^>>CorrectEven though a little mistake is in your sentense, your composition skill is so nice.^^>>Even though there were a few mistakes in your sentences, your writing skill is so nice.Chonunchakkaeyo=>Chonun chak hae yo.Chonunlan-gugoul=>Chonun han-gul-oul(I think th others are perfect.)>>Correct [spelling check: the]If you want to study more Korean language, you can require me.^^ Anytimes.^^>>If you want to study more of Korean language, you can refer to me any time.-Homework for today-What do you kick yourself for the most?I kick myself what I made my first girl friend left from me.^^>>I kick myself for what I have done that caused my girlfriend to leave me.I think it is the most mistake in my life.^^>>I think it is the worst mistake that I have done in my life.PSKlein. I apologize to you for a situation, that I can not have our class tomorrow.>>CorrectBecause I will go to the field.T,T>>CorrectSo, i think that we may not have the time for our class. So sorry...>>Correct [capitalization: \"I\"]But, If you will leave some message for me, i will study about your letter.^^>>But if you will leave some messages for me, I will study them.Good night.^^ >>Correct

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