Hi there^^

2014-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What kind of places are your faverite? Mountain? or Beach or any other places? I am going to introduce to you my faverite place. It is a great place to have visited until now, the place's name is JEJU Island. I think it is the best wonderful place in the world. This is island that be choonen especially by tourist attraction in Korea, it have being kept a good picturesque original nature. And all most all parts of there are made for tourists. So I want you to go there, if you have enough time and fund.^^ (Almost all culture products are expensive. Because there is a tourist attraction.^^) It is my best faverite place. But I can't descrive about there because this place has very many good spots for human eyes.

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Hi, Kirk! I love going to the beach, though I don\'t know how to swim. I am also fond of going to the mountains. As for your recommendation, I will definitely go to Jeju Island. If you are free, perhaps you can be my tour guide. Thank you for describing the place that you like the most the best way you can. If given the chance, would you like to stay in this place forever? It can be good to stay in a place that you like the most, right? Well Kirk, whatever your plans may be, you know that I always wish you the best. Good luck with your English studies and of course do your best in your exam this coming Saturday. You can do it! _Klein What kind of places are your faverite? >>What kinds of places are your favorites? >>What kinds of places do you like?Mountain? or Beach or any other places?>>Correct!I am going to introduce to you my faverite place.>>Correct [favorite]It is a great place to have visited until now, the place\'s name is JEJU Island.>>It has been a great place to visit until now and the place\'s name is Jeju Island.I think it is the best wonderful place in the world.>>Correct!This is island that be choonen especially by tourist attraction in Korea, it have being kept a good picturesque original nature.>>This is the island chosen especially by tourists. Since it is a tourist attraction in Korea, its picturesque nature has been kept.And all most all parts of there are made for tourists.>>And almost all parts of it are made for tourists.So I want you to go there, if you have enough time and fund.^^ >>Correct!(Almost all culture products are expensive. Because there is a tourist attraction.^^)>>Almost all cultural products are expensive because it is a tourist attraction.It is my best faverite place.>>It is my most favorite place. >>It is my favorite place because it is the best!But I can\'t descrive about there because this place has very many good spots for human eyes. >>But I can\'t describe everything there because this place has very many good spots or sights.

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