Hi there^^

2014-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How was your a day today.^^ I have had a good time until now. Maybe, if i will have a good sleep, I may feel better.^^ And i think the way how i do not make any problems to people around me is listening to other people. It is very important thing because if i don't know other people's opinion, i don't understand them. And understanding other people is the way that i do not make a problem to them. Is it good answer.??^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, Kirk! It sure is another fine day for both of us. Are you resting at this hour? You need to take a nap Kirk, so you can regain your strength. As for your answer, I\'m going to give you two thumbs up! Listening is of utmost important to avoid miscommunication. In fact, whenever we talk, I feel that you are very attentive. It\'s quite inevitable for you to miss some of my words but when you do, you try to clarify it with me. You never fail to amaze me with this good personality of yours! All I want you to do is to keep it up and to listen to yourself as well. This is a friendly advice from yours truly! May you have a safe afternoon, Kirk. Have a good rest! _Klein How was your a day today.^^>>How was your day today? >>How was your day?I have had a good time until now. >>Correct OR >> I am having a good time. Maybe, if i will have a good sleep, I may feel better.^^>>Correct!And i think the way how i do not make any problems to people around me is listening to other people.>>And I think for me not to make any problems to those people around me is to listen to them. >>And I think the way to avoid making troubles for the people around me is for me to listen to them.It is very important thing because if i don\'t know other people\'s opinion, i don\'t understand them.>>It is a very important thing because if I don\'t know other people\'s opinion, I won\'t understand them.And understanding other people is the way that i do not make a problem to them.>>Correct OR >> And understanding other people is the way for me not to make a problem to and for them.Is it good answer.??^^ >>Is it a good answer?

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