Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Klein^^ Long time no see.^^
Here is an answering for your question.^^
-What do you think are the qualities of a good entrepreneur? Explain each in detail.-
I think entrepreneurs who is my dear people around me.
Their are two guys that one is my father and other is in my choir member.
First of all, my father is a good entrepreneur because he make a firm himself nevertheless it is just a small thing.
I think him who have been a energetic man since begining his business until now.
I remember that he had a working time during 3days do not have a resting time.
I respect him.^^
And other person of good entrepreneur in my choir is to have lived same to my father.^^
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Kirk!
How are you feeling right now?
How I hope you are no longer tired.
I think it is much better for you to think of your father when you feel like you are working too much.
By then, you will be inspired and your fatigue will be effaced.
He and your choir member sure are hardworking.
They are so admirable!
How I hope we can be like them, too.
Let us start working hard Kirk!
I will catch you again on our next composition board.
_Klein
Hi Klein^^ Long time no see.^^>>Correct!Here is an answering for your question.^^>>Here is an answer to your question.-What do you think are the qualities of a good entrepreneur? Explain each in detail.-I think entrepreneurs who is my dear people around me.>>I think of two entrepreneurs who are dear to me.Their are two guys that one is my father and other is in my choir member.>>One is my father and the other one is my choir member.
>>These two guys are my father and my choir member.First of all, my father is a good entrepreneur because he make a firm himself nevertheless it is just a small thing.>>First of all, my father is a good entrepreneur because he put up a firm, himself, though it is just a small one.I think him who have been a energetic man since begining his business until now.>>I think of him as an energetic man since he began his business until now.I remember that he had a working time during 3days do not have a resting time.>>I remember that he once worked for three long days with no resting time.I respect him.^^>>Correct!And other person of good entrepreneur in my choir is to have lived same to my father.^^
>>And the other person who is a good entrepreneur in my choir has lived the same as my father.
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