Hi there^^

2014-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you think is the best way to keep in touch with your good friends? Today, communication systems have been developed by many people. So, recently, we can have communication with my dear friends easily.^^ Just a few month ago, i can have a communication with my dear friend "Nicholas" in USA. Modern times, To keep in touch with someone is very easy.^^

강사 첨삭

I completely agree with you Kirk! It certainly has become so easy for more or less everybody to stay in touch with their family and friends despite distance due to advancements in technology. I can sense that Nicholas is really your best friend. I\'m so glad that you have him, so you won\'t feel so alone. You need to keep in touch with me at all times, as well, OK? It\'s the best way to practice your English communication skills. Keep safe Kirk! May you continue to have a pleasant day. _Klein What do you think is the best way to keep in touch with your good friends?Today, communication systems have been developed by many people.>>Correct!So, recently, we can have communication with my dear friends easily.^^>>Correct!Just a few month ago, i can have a communication with my dear friend \"Nicholas\" in USA.>>Just a few months ago, I had a communication with my dear friend Nicholas in the USA.Modern times, To keep in touch with someone is very easy.^^ >>In modern times, to keep in touch with someone is very easy. >>At modern times, keeping in touch with someone is very easy.

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