Hi there^^

2014-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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It is my third answering.^^ Do you always keep a stiff upper lip amidst all odds? If yes, how do you do it? If not, why do you say so? Maybe, if i have some odds, i try these things that i can do. Of course, some times i give up doing these thins because i am just a human. Maybe, if i get a situation that i give up that, ASAP i give up to do this. When someone get a impossible mission, if the person give up this mission, this situation may become a way of solution that the person solve this mission.^^

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This is so deep Kirk! You are certainly thinking deeply about life. My take on this is that there\'s no such thing as an impossible mission. Sometimes, we just misinterpret the orders given to us. One of my friends even shared a story with me. She said, \"There\'s this man who was asked to push a huge rock. It is as big as a hill, so it must be heavy. The man complained. He said that it is impossible for him to accomplish this task. He said that he can\'t move it.\" What can you say about the complaint of the man Kirk? And this was the response to his lament: \"I am not asking you to move the rock. I just want you to push it. And that\'s it.\" This is such an inspiring story, isn\'t it Kirk? I can\'t wait to hear what you think about this. Are you having a great afternoon, so far? Always smile Kirk! I can\'t wait to greet you a happy, happy, happy birthday. Keep safe! _Klein It is my third answering.^^>>It is my third answer. >>This is my third answer.Do you always keep a stiff upper lip amidst all odds? If yes, how do you do it? If not, why do you say so?Maybe, if i have some odds, i try these things that i can do.>>Maybe, if I have some odds, I will try these things that I can do.Of course, some times i give up doing these thins because i am just a human.>>Of course, sometimes, I give up doing these things because I am just human.Maybe, if i get a situation that i give up that, ASAP i give up to do this.>>Maybe, if I am put in a situation where I have to give that up, I will give it up to do this ASAP.When someone get a impossible mission, if the person give up this mission, this situation may become a way of solution that the person solve this mission.^^ >>When someone gets an impossible mission and if that person gives up this mission, this situation may become a solution of that person to solve this mission.

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