Hi there^^

2014-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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JUMP TO CONCLUSIONS: In not more than 10 sentences, answer the following questions. Do students need extramural activities? Why do you say so? For your question, I can say "Yes". Because, very many Korean students need to more extramural activities. Of course, i don't know thoughts of students in the whole world. About these situation, I understand it that is very natural situations. Because, even though a school have many material and money, people, the school does not be able to make somethings which students want and need to. And I think distributing "The bic subject!" that the school have to another associations and external agencies is more effective. Also, I think it to make organically is better than.^^ Is it proper answers about your question?^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kirk! Of course, it is a proper answer! Besides, you were asked to jump to conclusions, so this one is undeniably acceptable. Why do you always doubt yourself, your answer? Please have some more faith in yourself. Honestly, for me, extramural activities are a must! I never had much during my school days, so I regret not taking part in such. I just have one question Kirk: What do you mean by \"BIC SUBJECT\"? What I know is Book Industry Communication. Is it right? I\'m not really sure. Please give light to this one tomorrow. Thank you very much Kirk! It\'s time for me to say goodbye again. But no worries, I will catch you again next time. Until then Kirk! _Klein JUMP TO CONCLUSIONS: In not more than 10 sentences, answer the following questions.Do students need extramural activities? Why do you say so?For your question, I can say \"Yes\".>>Correct!Because, very many Korean students need to more extramural activities.>>Because very many Korean students need more extramural activities.Of course, i don\'t know thoughts of students in the whole world.>>Of course, I don\'t know the thoughts of students all over the world.About these situation, I understand it that is very natural situations.>>About this situation, I understand that it is very natural.Because, even though a school have many material and money, people, the school does not be able to make somethings which students want and need to.>>Because even though a school has very many materials, money, and people, the school is still unable to make some things, which students want and need.And I think distributing \"The bic subject!\" that the school have to another associations and external agencies is more effective.>>And I think distributing \"THE BIC SUBJECTs\" that the school has to other associations and external agencies is more effective.Also, I think it to make organically is better than.^^>>Also, I think it making it organically is better.Is it proper answers about your question?^^ >>Are there proper answers to your question? >>Is it a proper answer to your question?

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