Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you?
I feel so good now.
Because, after raining in yesterday, as the weather was good today.
(But now, the weather is cloudy.)
Any way, i like this weather, because the weather like such is very cool.^^
How is a weather in your country.
-Homework for today-
Hm.....
In fact, i don't have any idea about that question.
Maybe, I am living now busy, as planing my life.
But, there is a important thing that the society will be changed.
It is that the people have familiar mind for their neighborhood.
Because today, the Korean people do not have some communications with their neighborhood.
So, the people don't know about each other.
It is very important problem in my country.
Of course, some people do not understand about this problem.^^
P.S
Klein.! You are my dear friend and good teacher.
I am helped from your theaching every day.^^
Do not say like your message on your feedback!^^
강사 첨삭
Good day to you Kirk!
I\'m fine; thank you for asking. How about you, how are you doing? It sure is your BIG day, so you must be enjoying every single minute of it.
Too bad I cannot take part in your celebration.
Nonetheless, I should be glad because you are with the people that treasure you the most, not to mention Nicholas.
He really is your true friend!
I was able to greet you, too, so I should be grateful for that.
As for the weather here in the Philippines, I can say that it is relatively gloomy because it is already the rainy season.
Just this morning, it rained heavily, so I got a bit wet on my way to work.
And moving on to your answer below, you know what, it is the exact opposite here in the Philippines.
People in one neighborhood know much about their neighbors, even private matters, which also creates many problems.
But I understand your dilemma Kirk. It would really be better if you are acquainted with your neighbors, like good friends, brothers or sisters.
You have such a friendly nature! Why don\'t you try making friends in your neighborhood?
This way, you will feel that somehow, you are solving this critical problem in Korea.
Your circle of friends will even be much bigger.
To wrap this up, thank you for treating me as your friend, Kirk!
I\'m so happy to have you not merely as a student but as a great FRIEND.
NUL HAENGBOK HASEYO!
_Klein
How are you?I feel so good now.>>CorrectBecause, after raining in yesterday, as the weather was good today.>>Because after the rain yesterday, the weather is good today.(But now, the weather is cloudy.)>>CorrectAny way, i like this weather, because the weather like such is very cool.^^>>Correct [anyway]How is a weather in your country.>>How is the weather in your country?-Homework for today-Hm.....In fact, i don\'t have any idea about that question.>>CorrectMaybe, I am living now busy, as planing my life.>>Maybe I am busy living and planning my life.But, there is a important thing that the society will be changed.>>But there is an important thing in the society that will be changed.It is that the people have familiar mind for their neighborhood.>>It is for people to have familiarity with their neighborhood.Because today, the Korean people do not have some communications with their neighborhood.>>Because today, Koreans do not have some communications with their neighbors.So, the people don\'t know about each other.>>So, they don\'t know each other.It is very important problem in my country.>>It is a very critical problem in my country.Of course, some people do not understand about this problem.^^>>CorrectP.SKlein.! You are my dear friend and good teacher.>>CorrectI am helped from your theaching every day.^^>>I get help from your teaching every day.Do not say like your message on your feedback!^^
>>Do not say the words like your message in your feedback.
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