Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I read your feedback and also i agree it.
The way that make friendly neighbors is most important but it is so easy.
But, now i have the time to make friendly neighbors is impossible because it is hard work to me.T,T
But, if i have a chance to do it, i must try this.^^
-Homework for today-
How are you going to sell a jalopy to me? Be as persuasive as you can.
So.... Will i must sell a jalopy to you?
If i will be happened this situation, i will give this car to you for free.^^
Of course, i want to sell the car to you, but i won't do this.T,T
Because, you are my friend.^^;;
P.S
Wow... i get a new one that today is a special day to your nation.
Wow...!! I congratulate this day that is special to your country, too.!!
강사 첨삭
Kirk, you can be as friendly as you wish to be. Trust me!
Just treat them like how you treat me. I\'m pretty sure that they will love you!
If you will say that it is difficult, then I guess it will be, so it should be the other way around - it is easy.
As for the jalopy, thanks Kirk! Too bad I don\'t know how to drive.
Now you have to teach me many things. Let me enumerate them:
[1] How to swim
[2] How to sing well
[3] How to play the piano
[4] How to drive
[5] How to be such a nice person
Thanks for everything Kirk,
More birthdays to come, more blessings!
_Klein
P.S.
Better invite me on your next birthday party.
I read your feedback and also i agree it.>>I read your feedback and I also agree with it.The way that make friendly neighbors is most important but it is so easy.>>The way to make friends with neighbors is most important and is so easy.But, now i have the time to make friendly neighbors is impossible because it is hard work to me.T,T>>But now, I have time to make friends with them but is impossible because it is hard work to me.But, if i have a chance to do it, i must try this.^^>>Correct!-Homework for today-How are you going to sell a jalopy to me? Be as persuasive as you can.So.... Will i must sell a jalopy to you?>>So, must I sell a jalopy to you?
>>So, will I sell a jalopy to you?If i will be happened this situation, i will give this car to you for free.^^>>If this situation will happen, I will give this car to you for free.Of course, i want to sell the car to you, but i won\'t do this.T,TBecause, you are my friend.^^;;>>Correct!P.SWow... i get a new one that today is a special day to your nation.>>Wow, I just learned that today is also a special day in your nation!Wow...!!
I congratulate this day that is special to your country, too.!!
>>I congratulate your country today for its special celebration, too.
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