HI there^^

2014-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Yes! I agree with your metioned opinion yesterday in your feedback. I think that the body language is very important. So, some time i have imagined that i communicate with you to meet. Maybe, we have had good lesson times, if i have communicated in front of you.^^ Some time, i want that i will meet people who are not able to meet me. The people are the people that i can just communicste. If I will visit your country, i will go to your towm for meeting you.^^ (If you don't mind....^^) And, about your sencond question i don't konw her name...T,T I just watched her face on facebook. -Home work for today- Maybe, if some gruops have many jack of all trades, they can succeed in many project that they have. But, i don't like this situation because the general people have some characters to be strong. So, I don't want the many people to include in my gruop.^^ Just, if I work with a few these guys and girls, it is so lucky situation.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for always taking my side, Kirk! You barely argue with me. I am really curious how you use body language in your daily life. Gestures can be culture-based, so in general, it really interests me. Our classes would even be more enjoyable if you can see me talk. Even though you can\'t see me, whenever we talk, I really make tons of gestures. I feel like I can express myself more with simple gestures that I have gotten used of making. Do you also make some gestures during our classes? Oh, how I hope I can see you. So if you are going to drop by my place, I wouldn\'t mind at all. In fact, I would be so delighted! Just let me know when that time comes, so I can finally meet you then. I would also like to meet Nicholas\' girlfriend. Is she pretty, intelligent, sweet and kind? No worries, you will soon find a Korean lady who is much better than her. Maybe she\'s a jack-of-all-trades! If that time comes, you sure are going to be one of the luckiest male friends I have. Always keep me posted, Kirk! Maybe you are going to meet \"her\" later. Stay safe! Enjoy your weekend! _Klein Yes! I agree with your metioned opinion yesterday in your feedback.>>Yes, I agree with what you mentioned yesterday in your feedback! >>Yes, I agree with your opinion yesterday in your feedback!I think that the body language is very important.>>I think that body language is very important.So, some time i have imagined that i communicate with you to meet.>>So sometimes, I imagine communicating with you in person. >>So I have imagined meeting and communicating you in person one time.Maybe, we have had good lesson times, if i have communicated in front of you.^^>>Maybe, we would have good lessons if we communicate in person. >>Maybe, we would have good lesson times if I am in front of you.Some time, i want that i will meet people who are not able to meet me. >>Some time, I will meet those people who are unable to meet me.The people are the people that i can just communicste.>>Those people are those that I only communicate with.If I will visit your country, i will go to your towm for meeting you.^^ >>If I will visit your country, I will go to your town to meet you.(If you don\'t mind....^^)>>Correct!And, about your sencond question i don\'t konw her name...T,T>>Correct [second]I just watched her face on facebook.>>I just saw her face on Facebook.-Home work for today-Maybe, if some gruops have many jack of all trades, they can succeed in many project that they have.>>Maybe, if some groups have many jacks-of-all-trades, they can succeed in many projects that they have.But, i don\'t like this situation because the general people have some characters to be strong.>>But I don\'t like this situation because people in general have some characters that need to be strengthened. >>But I don\'t like this situation because common people have some characters that need to be strengthened.So, I don\'t want the many people to include in my gruop.^^>>So, I don\'t want many people to be included in my group.Just, if I work with a few these guys and girls, it is so lucky situation. >>If I will just work with a few of these guys and girls, it would be a lucky situation.

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