Hi there^^

2014-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ If i have some problems with people around me, i do not talk about these problems right now. So, somethimes i make a problem so serious. Maybe, I think it is my week point that is in all my life. In fact, recently i mend my character a litte better but it is by week point until now.

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Good morning, Kirk! Thanks for finding some time for your homework despite your hectic schedule today. I even disturbed you when you were watching the match between Korean and Russian teams. I\'m so sorry for that. Enjoy watching the game and just give me some updates, if you like, tomorrow. Continue mending your character as well, in line with what you mentioned here, so you can turn your weak point into one of your strengths in due time. Keep safe Kirk! _Klein Hi there^^If i have some problems with people around me, i do not talk about these problems right now.So, somethimes i make a problem so serious.>>Correct! [capitalization: pronoun \"I\"; spelling check: \"sometimes\"]Maybe, I think it is my week point that is in all my life.>>Maybe, it is my weak point all my life. >>I think it is the weak point in my life.In fact, recently i mend my character a litte better but it is by week point until now. >>In fact, recently, I mended my character a little better but it is still my weak point until now.

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