Hi there^^

2014-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi^^ How are your today.^^ The Korea's weather was so cool during a day. So, I felt also cool like today.^^ I want to keep this weather.^^ -Homework for today- I think that a person in the same boat is Nicholas. Even if he has goals in his life that is differnt from mine, i think he is my soul mate. Because, he and me know problems and worries each other when we encounter these things and we know same way that we take care each other. In fact, almost all times whenever i got the problems, he have taken care of me and also me too.^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Kirk! We are having a pretty hot day, unlike your description of the weather in your place. I\'m feeling so sleepy, which isn\'t right. Good thing your composition has awakened my senses. I guess Nicholas is such a nice person, like you. Does he also look a bit like you? I am also thinking that he is the brother that you never had. Good thing you found each other! Lucky!!! Treasure your friendship! Thanks for sharing this with me Kirk. Just go over my recommendations below. If you have some questions, just let me know. I will catch you again tomorrow! Enjoy the rest of the afternoon. _Klein Hi^^>>CorrectHow are your today.^^>>How are you today?The Korea\'s weather was so cool during a day.>>Korea\'s weather was so cool during the day.So, I felt also cool like today.^^>>So, I also felt cool like today.I want to keep this weather.^^>>Correct!-Homework for today-I think that a person in the same boat is Nicholas.>>I think the person who is in the same boat as me in Nicholas.Even if he has goals in his life that is differnt from mine, i think he is my soul mate.>>Even if he has goals in his life that are different from mine, I think he is my soul mate.Because, he and me know problems and worries each other when we encounter these things and we know same way that we take care each other.>>Because, he and I know the problems and worries of each other when we encounter these things and we know the same way to take care of each other.In fact, almost all times whenever i got the problems, he have taken care of me and also me too.^^ >>In fact, almost all times, whenever I got/have some problems, he takes care of me and vice versa.

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