Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How about your weekend.^^
Today, i met my x-girl friend.^^
But, i didn't have any emotions for her this time.
But, now i am feeling to miss when i had met her.
Is it odd situation.^^ Because, i have thought that i forget her.^^;;
-Homework for today-
What are you in the market for and why?
I most want in the market for is electrical appliances about PCS and PC.
Maybe, almost all young boys have many desires about that.^^
But, I don't know why I and they have the desires.^^
강사 첨삭
What an extraordinary weekend you had!
I think you still like her that much. Besides, she happened to be your very first girlfriend and you once imagined yourself spending the rest of your life with her. Does she have a new boyfriend? If none, maybe you can start over again or pick up from where you ended.
Listen to your heart, Kirk! I can feel that it is also one of your desires other than what you just mentioned below - electrical appliances.
Before I bid you goodbye here, I just want to remind you to take note of my recommendations below to improve your sentence construction.
Thank you Kirk!
May you have a great week ahead!
_Klein
How about your weekend.^^>>Correct
OR >> How about your weekend?Today, i met my x-girl friend.^^>>Correct [ex-girlfriend/previous girlfriend]But, i didn\'t have any emotions for her this time.>>Correct [capitalization: pronoun \"I\"] But, now i am feeling to miss when i had met her.>>But now, I am missing the time when I met her.
>>But now, I feel like I am missing the time that I had met her.Is it odd situation.^^ Because, i have thought that i forget her.^^;;>>Isn\'t it an odd situation, because I thought that I had forgotten about her?-Homework for today-What are you in the market for and why?I most want in the market for is electrical appliances about PCS and PC.>>What I most want in the market for are electrical appliances for PCS and PC.Maybe, almost all young boys have many desires about that.^^>>Correct!
But, I don\'t know why I and they have the desires.^^
>>Correct
OR >> But I don\'t know why we have these desires.
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