Hi there^^

2014-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein.^^ I agree with your opinion that was mentioned this monday. Of course, I like to talk with you to share the best ourselves with others. And then, I think that I grow up my English speaking and listening skill through that. -Homework for today- Do you think that if students study hard in school, in the long run they will be successful? Why do you say so? I agree with your words just a little because to be successful in one's life can not make just in the school. If The one is want to know some ways that are able to successful that can not theach in the school, and the one can study this things just outside and wild, the one go outside

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Thanks for posting your homework again, Kirk! I kind of miss checking your compositions. Sharing your experiences with others is really one of the best parts of living. I\'m glad that I can share some of mine with you. It can also be related to your answer to the question below. Not everything can be learned within the confines of a classroom. Studying hard can even be interpreted in many ways that will definitely result to our success in varying degrees. As of us, let us continue exploring the world and ourselves. Enjoy the rest of the day, Kirk! _Klein Hi Klein.^^I agree with your opinion that was mentioned this monday.>>Correct [capitalization: \"Monday\"]Of course, I like to talk with you to share the best ourselves with others.>>Of course, I like to talk with you to share the best of myself with others.And then, I think that I grow up my English speaking and listening skill through that.>>And then, I think that I have increased the level of my English speaking and listening skills through that.-Homework for today-Do you think that if students study hard in school, in the long run they will be successful? Why do you say so?I agree with your words just a little because to be successful in one\'s life can not make just in the school.>>I slightly agree with your words because success in one\'s life can\'t just be made in school.If The one is want to know some ways that are able to successful that can not theach in the school, and the one can study this things just outside and wild, the one go outside >>If someone wants to know some ways to be successful, those cannot be taught in school; instead, s/he can study these things outside in the wild, so s/he must go out.

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