Hi there^^

2014-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hm...... If I have some situations that is worst, I can depend on my friends. Especially, I might depend on my dear friend Mr. [Name] and Chang and Lee.^^ Of courese, Nicholas is the person whom I can depend.^^ On second thoughts, i look like a guy is blessed from God, because I have many good friends.^^ Do you have any friends like me?^^

강사 첨삭

What are friends for Kirk?I think you know very well the answer to this question. You really are blessed with so many good friends. That\'s why you have to treasure them always! Again, thank you for sharing this with me. Actually, when I posted this question on you, I was already thinking about Nicholas. Maintain your great relationship with him! Oh, there\'s another composition. I will catch you there! _Klein Hm......If I have some situations that is worst, I can depend on my friends.>>If I am in worst situations, I can depend on my friends.Especially, I might depend on my dear friend Mr. [Name] and Chang and Lee.^^>>I might depend especially on my dear friends Mr.Lim, Chang and Lee.Of courese, Nicholas is the person whom I can depend.^^>>Of course, Nicholas is the person whom I can depend on.On second thoughts, i look like a guy is blessed from God, because I have many good friends.^^>>On second thoughts, I look like a guy blessed by God, because I have many good friends.Do you have any friends like me?^^ >>Correct OR >> Do you have any friends like I do?  

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