Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there^^.
How about your day today?
I met a older brother who i met in America this day.
So. I visit some famous street and ancient palace in Korea.
I was so glad to visit there because i have not visited these places for a long time.
Anyway, today is exciting for me.^^
How should parents take care of their hyper children?
Well......
Maybe,If I should have some good child near future, I will play with them.
For this situation, I might become a Superman....haha...;;
So recently, I am getting many exercises.^^;;
What is your idea about this subject?^^
강사 첨삭
Hello, Kirk! Good morning!
You sure had a great time with your friend yesterday.
How I hope I can visit those palaces as well. Maybe not this year.
Did you converse with your friend in English? How was it?
Were you hyper when you were with him?
I\'m just curious because based on your answer below, you will try to keep up with your hyper child or children in the future.
You will then be the NEW SUPERMAN.
As for me, I will watch what they eat. I will not give them too much sweet food.
I will have to watch them closely, so they can be safe.
I guess my answer is not enough. Let\'s think about it thoroughly, so when \"that day\" comes, we\'ll be ready.
May you have an exciting day again Kirk!
_Klein
Hi there^^.How about your day today?>>CorrectI met a older brother who i met in America this day.>>I met an older brother of mine who I first met in America this day.
>>I met my older pal who I first met in America today.So. I visit some famous street and ancient palace in Korea.>>So we visited some famous streets and ancient palaces in Korea.
>>So we went to some famous streets and ancient palaces.I was so glad to visit there because i have not visited these places for a long time.>>I was so glad to visit them because I have not visited these places for a long time.Anyway, today is exciting for me.^^>>Correct!How should parents take care of their hyper children?Well......Maybe,If I should have some good child near future, I will play with them.>>Maybe, if I should have some good children in the near future, I will play with them.For this situation, I might become a Superman....haha...;;>>CorrectSo recently, I am getting many exercises.^^;;
>>Correct!What is your idea about this subject?^^
>>Correct!
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