Hi there
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Debby
We've got so much rain in this afternoon. In the noon, I saw the clouds in the air and I predicted that it will gonna rain soon. It did, but it stopped soon. it looked like shower and I can't see a typoon in this year I guees. You are suffering the typoon, so keep you safe and don't forget an umbrella when you go out. :)
I practiced my pronounciation following the media. Expecially british pronounciation sounded gentle and nice. So I practiced to pronounce like them. By the way, it stands out a little among another people.
See you :D
<Essay>
I do lie in a situation for another person not me. It calls "white lie", right? Of course I lied for myself sometimes but I try not to lie. I've heard that human must lie sometime... I don't know that I've experienced a "white lie" before. I always exposed people's lie.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
I\'m sorry if I was not able to send a repsond right away.
I was trying to do it before your class but your class was
one of my earlier classes next to many students so I got my hands full.
Well.... here it is! kkkkkkk
Spelling checks and verb tenses were some of the minor mistakes.
Pratcice your British English.
See you soon,Take care^^
^^T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi! Debby>> Hi Debby!^^We\'ve got so much rain in this afternoon.
>> CORRECT
Or> We experienced a lot of rain this afternoon.
In the noon, I saw the clouds in the air and I predicted that it will gonna rain soon.
>> At noon, I saw the clouds in the air and I predicted that it will rain soon.
It did, but it stopped soon.
>> CORRECT
OR> It really did rain but of course it stopped too.
it looked like shower and I can\'t see a typoon in this year I guees.
>> It looked like a shower and I can\'t see a typhoon in this year I guess.
You are suffering the typoon, so keep you safe and don\'t forget an umbrella when you go out. :)>> You are suffering the typhoon, so keep yourself safe and don\'t forget an umbrella when you go out. :)I practiced my pronounciation following the media.
>> CORRECT
OR> I practiced pronunciation with the media as my guide.
Expecially british pronounciation sounded gentle and nice.
>>British pronunciation sounded especially gentle and nice.
So I practiced to pronounce like them.
>> CORRECTOr> I tried to copy their accent.
By the way, it stands out a little among another people.>> CORRECT
OR> It sounds more special.See you :D>> CORRECT
OR> I\'ll catch you later.<Essay>I do lie in a situation for another person not me.
>> I tell a lie in a situation for another person but not for me.
It calls \"white lie\", right? Of course I lied for myself sometimes but I try not to lie.
>> It\'s called \"white lie\", right? Of course I lied for myself sometimes but I try not to lie.
I\'ve heard that human must lie sometime...
>> I\'ve heard that humans must lie sometimes.
I don\'t know that I\'ve experienced a \"white lie\" before.
>> I don\'t know if I\'ve experienced a saying a \"white lie\" before.
I always exposed people\'s lie.
>> I always expose people\'s lies.
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