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2014-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi! Debby We've got so much rain in this afternoon. In the noon, I saw the clouds in the air and I predicted that it will gonna rain soon. It did, but it stopped soon. it looked like shower and I can't see a typoon in this year I guees. You are suffering the typoon, so keep you safe and don't forget an umbrella when you go out. :) I practiced my pronounciation following the media. Expecially british pronounciation sounded gentle and nice. So I practiced to pronounce like them. By the way, it stands out a little among another people. See you :D <Essay> I do lie in a situation for another person not me. It calls "white lie", right? Of course I lied for myself sometimes but I try not to lie. I've heard that human must lie sometime... I don't know that I've experienced a "white lie" before. I always exposed people's lie.

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Hi there [이름]^^ I\'m sorry if I was not able to send a repsond right away. I was trying to do it before your class but your class was one of my earlier classes next to many students so I got my hands full. Well.... here it is! kkkkkkk Spelling checks and verb tenses were some of the minor mistakes. Pratcice your British English. See you soon,Take care^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi! Debby>> Hi Debby!^^We\'ve got so much rain in this afternoon. >> CORRECT Or> We experienced a lot of rain this afternoon. In the noon, I saw the clouds in the air and I predicted that it will gonna rain soon. >> At noon, I saw the clouds in the air and I predicted that it will rain soon. It did, but it stopped soon. >> CORRECT OR> It really did rain but of course it stopped too. it looked like shower and I can\'t see a typoon in this year I guees. >> It looked like a shower and I can\'t see a typhoon in this year I guess. You are suffering the typoon, so keep you safe and don\'t forget an umbrella when you go out. :)>> You are suffering the typhoon, so keep yourself safe and don\'t forget an umbrella when you go out. :)I practiced my pronounciation following the media. >> CORRECT OR> I practiced pronunciation with the media as my guide.  Expecially british pronounciation sounded gentle and nice. >>British pronunciation sounded especially gentle and nice.  So I practiced to pronounce like them. >> CORRECTOr> I tried to copy their accent.  By the way, it stands out a little among another people.>> CORRECT OR> It sounds more special.See you :D>> CORRECT OR> I\'ll catch you later.<Essay>I do lie in a situation for another person not me. >> I tell a lie in a situation for another person but not for me. It calls \"white lie\", right? Of course I lied for myself sometimes but I try not to lie. >> It\'s  called \"white lie\", right? Of course I lied for myself sometimes but I try not to lie.  I\'ve heard that human must lie sometime... >> I\'ve heard that humans must lie sometimes. I don\'t know that I\'ve experienced a \"white lie\" before. >> I don\'t know if I\'ve experienced a saying a \"white lie\" before. I always exposed people\'s lie. >> I always expose people\'s lies.  

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